[Feilong x Takaba] - Reversed

[cland3stin3]

Title: Reversed
Fandom: Viewfinder
Pairing: Fei Long x Takaba, Asami x Takaba
Genre: Angst, romance
Word Count: 436
Rating: PG-13
I will disregard Mikhail and whatever his evil plans are for this fic. XP

Fei Long watches as Asami gathers Akihito into his arms where the younger man holds on for dear life. He sees relief creeps into Asami’s

Comments

[pugsley]

Oh my poor Fei Long but I have often thought that this is how it will be when Asami finally comes to take Akihito away. I almost cried because I felt so very sad for him.

The beautiful Fei Long is so ready to be loved and I really hope that Yamane Ayano gives him someone that will accept him for what and who he is. It would probably be hard to be with someone like Fei Long because he is the leader of Baishe and it can be a very scary and dangerous life to be apart of.

But for someone that looks like Fei Long I would put up with anything!! *hee hee*

Thank you for writing you lovely story. I really enjoyed it,

[cland3stin3]

It's only fair that Fei Long finds happiness in VF, because readers know how long he's been suffering. Mental torture and misunderstanding on his part just add to his problem T____T And he's so beautiful too.

*sigh*

You're welcome, and thanks for reading and taking the time to comment =D

[afterburn]

And then Asami shoots him in the head. 8D
No no no. Not really. And then everything is better again.

I really hope this happens. Soon too! Not 50 zillion chapters in the future.
Great job with writing this. It made me feel rather happy. ^-^

[cland3stin3]

I want VF to be longer so the drama extends, but I want it to end soon so I won't have to pull my hair off waiting for the next release T___T

Thanks for reading and taking the time to comment :) I hope you like it~

[afterburn]

Oh don't misread me, I want VF to go on for a long time. I just want Asami and Akihito together again before I pull out my hair as well! ^^;

Anytime, as long as you keep writing. ^-^

[cland3stin3]

I just want Asami and Akihito together again before I pull out my hair as well!

Yesh, it's true!
and Asami needs to treat Takaba a lil bit better too XP

very nice ending!

[dyoklako]

i love the bittersweet reunion and parting between these three. it would be nice if the three of them do end up together! YAY~! Therapy by sunflower1343!!!!! XDDDDD

i love this and i hope you can make a follow-up on either Asami and Takaba or with Fei Long and Tao (or whoever you might want to pair Fei-hime with--i.e. Mik-chan or Yoh even[!]) ^_~

Re: very nice ending!

[cland3stin3]

Gosh, I'd really really LOVE to pair FeiLong up with YOH, because Yoh is just so... so... *dies* He's just so hot! And he looks like an awesome seme too (to anyonone except Asami, XP) Maybe I'll write something about them next ;-)

But I'd also love to see future Fei Long with... Tao =D When he's as old as Asami, Tao will be a lot older too. *drools* And then it would be a sight to see.

I'm not really fond of 3some relationship, though. I don't know about that~

Oh, and thanks for reading and taking the time to comment. Hope you like it :)

Re: very nice ending!

[dyoklako]

YOH X FEI!!!! ME WANT!!! N O W ! ! ! XDDDDD

There was a fic series about Fei and Tao over here (or was it at yamane_ayano comm? anyways, it was nice but i'd like to see another one from you if that is possible? ^_~

love this fic and i'd like to read more from you. ^_^

Re: very nice ending!

[dyoklako]

*here meant club_sion. sorry, my bad. ^^"

[rajendora]

AWWWWW, *wipes at eyes* Let's hope this is how it does work out. After some exciting gun battles and drama with that russian guy.

[cland3stin3]

You know, I expect Mikhail to be the one who kidnaps Akihito right during the transaction between Asami and Fei Long, and the drama would be extended.

And I hope Fei Long will become friends with Akihito later on too =^__^=

*sigh*

Gosh, I want the next chapter to be out ASAP T___T

[cay_wylde]

It's a wonderful Story and though short, you managed to include many emotions like sadness, happiness, relief and hope. I really enjoyed it! ^^

[cland3stin3]

Thank you for reading and commenting! And I'm glad you enjoyed it too =D