Prison Break - Twilight

[clair_de_lune]

Title: Twilight
Author: clair-de-lune
Pairing: Michael/Lincoln
Genres: Slash, pre-series, angst
Rating: R
Warning: Incest
Summary: The bedroom is barely lit, and they wallow in this twilight - nobody here can see them, judge them, condemn them.
Notes: Written for pbff_echange with a prompt from camille-miko: Michael/Lincoln, the sentence “I missed you”, a feather and a sweet moment

Comments

[amodalie]

Bonsoir ma chère!

What a wonderful story!!! I was on the verge of shutting the computer down when I discovered it, just wanted to take a quick look, and... was totally hooked!

The way you describe the brother's relationship is very convincing and believable. Every other passage I found myself nodding *yes, that's exactly what I think*
They need each other, know they shouldn't so much, but can't help it - that's so sad, but beautiful at the same time. And you put it in just the right words.

Looking at your story index I see you're not doing slash normally, right? Well, I haven't read your other stories (yet), but maybe you should... :) This twilight relationship is marvellously done!

(And I even think of trying one of your stories in French in order to polish up my very old and rusty knowledge of the language... on va voir! (see?! it works!) *lol*)

Bye bye for now!!!
Amodalie

[clair_de_lune]

Thanks a lot. I don't write stories that... long, slashy and angsty very often, so I'm glad if it works for you :o)

Looking at your story index I see you're not doing slash normally, right?
Yes, almost right ;-) I'm usually and mostly in gen and het, but I've been writing (a few) slash fanfics for a couple of months - started with this one, actually. Not my main interest, but it's nice to try something else every now and then.

(And I even think of trying one of your stories in French in order to polish up my very old and rusty knowledge of the language... on va voir! (see?! it works!) *lol*)
*grin* Travaille bien, alors.
If you're looking for a short one, anything labeled "drabble" should be under 500 words ;-)

Thanks again for you feedback :o)

[clair_de_lune]

I like pre-series; it's probably easier to set up stories in this period, since the schedule in the show is quite busy. And well... truth is, I just have a soft spot for pre-series/pre-prison stories :-p
Thank you for reading and commenting :-)

[anisapologist]

This was fantastic! Loved the angst and it was very hot as well. I can totally see this happening...we need to have a spin off series: "Prison Break: The Early Years...Or Why Exactly Michael Scofield is so Fucked Up."

[clair_de_lune]

we need to have a spin off series
lol, nice idea ;o)
I'm glad you liked it, thanks a lot for your comment.

[clair_de_lune]

Thank you, I'm happy you enjoyed it :-)

[foophile]

Wow, this was amazing. I'm so glad you posted it over at Michael_Lincoln. I loved how the boys both tried to talk about it but ended up nowhere (it seemed very IC with a conversation between the two of them). As well as the guilt they both feel but havegiven up trying to fight against. You did a very good job of making their angst subtle enough to explain their desperation to be with each other (ie. Lincoln's inprisionment and disappearance). This was a great read, and I hope you post more over in the comm so I can comment! :)

[clair_de_lune]

Oh, thank you :D I can write fluff or more serious stories, but I don't do angst very often. So I'm glad (meaning 'a bit relieved') it's there but not overwhelming.
Aside from non Michael/Lincoln fics, I'll probably post another story and a drabble or two - one of them *pimping a bit* written for a challenge at foxriver_fic...
Thanks a lot for commenting :-)