A hint of bitchiness
FF. net Reviewer who can't use proper grammar thinks that my ficlet "would of been better" if I hadn't "used so much repetition", surely, you know what an anaphora is, right? Now, you're perfectly entitled to dislike a rhetorical device, but complaining about repetition in an anaphora is like... complaining about action in an action movie, or romance in a romance movie, or...
Yes, I may be a bit bitchy tonight, and not very nice. Sorry - or not ;)
Yes, I may be a bit bitchy tonight, and not very nice. Sorry - or not ;)