Prison Break - One More Step on the Way Down

Feb 05, 2012 13:14

Title: One More Step on the Way Down
Author: clair-de-lune
Fandom: Prison Break
Pairing: Michael/Lincoln
Category: Slash
Rating: NC-17
Warning: Incest
Word Count: ~ 880
Summary: It could be worse... (Pre-series)
Author’s Note: Written for oxoniensis’ Porn Battle XIII.

One More Step on the Way Down )

writing: prompts, fanfic: english, fic: one shot, pairing: michael/lincoln, category: slash, fandom: prison break, category: pwp

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metallikirk February 5 2012, 21:30:01 UTC
This was awesomely hot; I loved what you did with my prompts. Thank you for writing this! :o)

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clair_de_lune February 6 2012, 19:56:16 UTC
I'm so glad you liked it :) Thank you for the prompts and for your kind comment!

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emerald_embers February 5 2012, 22:02:10 UTC
This is absolutely delicious. I love how you've handled Lincoln's ideas of "Well, if I don't cross this line, it's *almost* okay", while Michael is much more open in wanting it even if he can't talk about it.

Lovely :).

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clair_de_lune February 6 2012, 20:00:24 UTC
Thanks a lot :D

Poor Lincoln feels guilty and tries to make what they do sound 'less bad', but he's a bit delusional, isn't he.
I've always seen Michael as the one more likely to go too far whatever the matter is; it would show in this aspect of their relationship too. Not to mention that Lincoln being the older one, the burden of guilt is probably heavier on him.

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rekindle956 February 6 2012, 05:51:28 UTC
Fantastic! Thank you so much for sharing it with us! :)

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clair_de_lune February 6 2012, 20:00:46 UTC
I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for reading and commenting :)

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tuesdaeschild February 6 2012, 11:01:42 UTC
Not sure using a dildo actually qualifies as not fucking your brother!! I think even enjoying watching your brother enjoying you fucking him with a dildo is a sure step to Hell because it's probably taboo to use sex toys on your brother!!

Doesn't mean I don't totally love it though!! :)

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clair_de_lune February 6 2012, 20:01:56 UTC
I wonder if Lincoln even realizes that, to some extent, using toys actually makes it worse since it means it's premeditated... (And um, fic author is considering this aspect only now. Shush!) At least, he feels guilty about it, although not enough not to do it again, apparently.

(I feel like I had something else to say about your comment, but I can't remember what *sigh*)

Thank you, Foxy *hugs*

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tuesdaeschild February 7 2012, 10:31:01 UTC
to some extent, using toys actually makes it worse since it means it's premeditated... (And um, fic author is considering this aspect only now. Shush!)

I don't think Lincoln realises this!! Then again, he is caught in his brother's come-fuck-me force field/tractor beam, so to speak, and that makes rational thought impossible!! :)

I feel like I had something else to say about your comment, but I can't remember what

You're not alone in this since that kind of thing happens to me all the time!!

And you're welcome, as always. *hugs back*

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camille_miko February 6 2012, 23:03:40 UTC
OMG ! C'est terrible. J'aime beaucoup. C'est... Wha *___*

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clair_de_lune February 7 2012, 19:52:29 UTC
Merci beaucoup :)

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