Prison Break - Stretches of Time

[clair_de_lune]

Title: Stretches of Time
Author: clair-de-lune
Fandom: Prison Break
Pairing: Michael/Lincoln
Category: Slash
Rating: NC-17
Warning: Incest
Word Count: ~ 2310
Summary: It takes about twenty seconds - of bliss, granted, but still barely twenty seconds. (Pre-series)

Comments

[tuesdaeschild]

Since you are never averse to feedback thought I'd offer some! ;) Actually, that's a very good comment!!

Okay, this is dirtybadwrong; but they're brothers so how could it be anything else?!! Yet entwined in the dirtybadwrongness is the brotherly affection and love...and some pretty darn good verbal sparring!! Some great snittiness (no such word but it fits!) between them and I love that so much! And who couldn't love teenage!Michael? ♥

There are many lines that stand out that make me smile or grin naughtily - he’s not fast enough for Michael and his laser-like, post-orgasmic, smitten baby brother vision. - but I singled this one out because it's such a fabulous description of Michael!! I loved Lincoln's teasing very much too - he has a wonderful way of winding up his little brother!

You really write such appealing Michael/Lincoln just about Every. Damn. Time. *licks lips hungrily*

*hugs*

[clair_de_lune]

The dirtybadwrong-ness is inherent to M/L fics, isn't? even when it's not stressed out directly. You don't really need to stress it out directly, anyway :-p

*g* You already you pointed out that same sentence when you beta-read the fic so I guess you did like it ;)

Thanks so much, Foxy!

[tuesdaeschild]

Oh yes! M/L fics could never be anything other than dirtybadwrong; thank goodness!! And it's not like we have to paint a graphic picture either! :)

*g* You already pointed out that same sentence when you beta-read the fic

The uncharitable soul would say I've started repeating myself due to advancing years but I think you got it right; it's because I really liked it!!

Always a pleasure, dear!

[filthy_bunny]

Ahhh, it never fails to brighten my day when I see a new M/L fic from you on my friends page. :D

You captured a really strong sense of intimacy and the deep, private familiarity that exists between them here. I love that. And also the dirtiness. Dirtiness is gooood. ;) Dammit, how do you even manage to make premature ejaculation sexy? XD

[clair_de_lune]

Thank you *bows*

You captured a really strong sense of intimacy and the deep, private familiarity that exists between them here.
The fic, or at least its end, turned out a bit more schmoopy - or is it affectionate? - than I thought it would be when I started it, but I'm quite pleased if this is how it feels :D

Dammit, how do you even manage to make premature ejaculation sexy? XD
Go figure! I guess it's only one of my oddest talents *g*

[amodalie]

Awwww, how can this be cute and so dirtywrong at the same time?! Hm, well okay, maybe because it's teen!Michael and so much desperate eagerness for his big brother! :D
Anyway, I love them being snotty with each other while they both get (and take) want they want.

Oh, and thank you by the way for using one of my fave words: Onomatopoeia! Somehow it's not seen very often in fanfic...

♥

[clair_de_lune]

I dunno!! *g* Michael being all about Lincoln is kind of cute - until one writes an incestuous take on it o_O

thank you by the way for using one of my fave words: Onomatopoeia!

My pleasure. This is what I do when I try to sound smart, use big words ;) Or maybe it's because in the same sentence, Michael is stressing out that he's a smart guy and using an unusual word was fitting: I honestly can't remember if I did this on purpose...

Thanks a lot for reading and commenting, ma'am, and glad you enjoyed it :D