Title: How to Handle a Competitive Streak
Author:
clair-de-lunePairing: Michael/Sara/Lincoln
Categories: Het, slash
Rating: R
Warning: Incest (implied)
Word Count: ~ 785
Disclaimer: Not mine. Just borrowing them for a while.
Summary: “She’s asking you if you’re being serious about saying out loud this kind of thing.” (Crackastic. Post-series, non-epilogue
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Sara mostly did rather well out of it and good on Michael for cheating...it was a nice little quirk in his otherwise kind of straight-laced character here. Except it's a 3-some...okay, straight-laced-ish!
There is no way on this earth that Lincoln would ever beat his brother in a sand-fortress (at least Michael's would be!) making contest!
And that last line made me giggle all over again!!
You did good!
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We don't know for sure if Michael cheated, now that I think of it. It's Sara's POV... maybe she simplyfies things a bit for clarity? Maybe rules weren't stated clearly enough that Michael didn't know he wasn't allowed to perform this kind of massage? *g*
And that last line made me giggle all over again!!
Totally valid question, given the opening line!
*hugs*
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I'm kind of hoping for not?!! *smirks*
Maybe rules weren't stated clearly enough that Michael didn't know he wasn't allowed to perform this kind of massage? *g*
Good point! Unless he was expressly told not to perform that kind of massage...it's not his fault that it didn't occur to Lincoln to tell him!!! ;-)
Totally valid question, given the opening line!
It was the perfect way to end it!!! Perfect!!
I've read through the BIG one once and I'm planning on reading through again in the morning...it's a pretty powerful fic, full of delicious textures and two rather alpha characters...with someone else a little child-like!! It's been totally worth waiting for!!
*hugs*
*hugs*
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And knowing his brother, Lincoln should have known that Michael would play dirty (sorry for the pun *g*)
with someone else a little child-like
You know, I think this is a part of the issue I was mentioning in the notes at the end of the story. The child-like someone asks for something and then waits rather passively to get it. Positive interpretation: he doesn't want to be pushy. Negative interpretation: he's a bit of an entitled little brat (I almost had Lincoln say "the little brat" about him towards the end of the fic...)
And *wipes forehead* if you liked it at the first reading.
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Course SHE would be the one to spur them on..lolz
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