Title: Drawing the Line
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clair-de-luneFandom: Prison Break
Characters: Michael/Lincoln/Derek, Michael/Lincoln
Category: Slash
Rating: NC-17
Warning: Incest
Word Count: ~ 3505
Disclaimer: Not mine. Just borrowing them for a while.
Summary: Michael is where Lincoln draws the line.
Author’s Note: This was supposed to be short and cracktastic. It’s long and
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First, the "slutty" word was tossed around with my beta. It's a word I don't like too much and rarely use, but that seemed fitting in this case - in a short-hand way for "knows what he wants and needs, and doesn't really care how it looks".
Second because of Lincoln being in control, yet not, yet yes, yet... It's exactly the feeling I had when writing the story - it's often true but especially here. I can't decide which of them has the "upper hand", if one of them indeed has it. I guess they both need each other, which makes them co-dependent even if they don't realize it? Michael needs Lincoln, obviously, but Lincoln doesn't want to let him go either. Um so, to not answer your question... I don't know how I do it because actually, I can't help thinking it may be as confusing for the reader as it is for me *g*
And third, because of that: ( ... )
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I really enjoyed the subtle brushstrokes of Lincoln and Derek's friendship..boundaries pushed, trust levels leaned on, and a secret shared in the most delicious way. Who knows where manly kisses might lead, especially with a good buddy who's not only a great sport about unorthodox family ties but also has a great ass. You are 100% ON board, Clair De Lune!
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Yay if Derek and Lincoln's friendship came across despite me shifting focus. And 'great sport' indeed since he freaked out a bit, but not nearly as much as you could have expected ;)
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Michael in slutty-mode is a wonderful thing! And yet he and Lincoln are still very much connected on an emotional and fraternal level, even if Derek is the third part of the triangle.
You're awesome at threesomes! :)
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You know, at first, I wanted to insist on Linc and Derek's friendship, and it's there, but not nearly as much as I'd planned it, and Michael is a lot more prominent. I guess I can't help coming back to what was the core of the show for me - OK, with quite an incestuous twist ;)
You're awesome at threesomes! :)
You shouldn't encourage me. Muse is lazy and waits to be fed prompts but sooner or later, hopefully, she'll wake up and then... there will be M/L/S stories ;)
*hugs* Foxy.
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And who implied the incestuous twist?!!! The creators of the show with their dysfunctional love line so you don't need to take the blame! And Linc's and Derek's friendship was certainly there; they shared lots of things so they were clearly best buddies. :)
but sooner or later, hopefully, she'll wake up and then there will be M/L/S stories ;)
And you're telling me not to encourage you!! ;)
*hugs you*
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And you're telling me not to encourage you!! ;)
Still no idea for fic :( The prompts last week made me write a few drabbles/ficlets but since then, even M/S/L doesn't make me write. Bad muse.
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'Boy toy' icon in this context? *g*
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Wonderfully written. I totally enjoyed cheeky, wanton Michael (of course! tsk, who wouldn't?) and Lincoln being torn between pure lust, and awkwardness and jealousy in front of a buddy.
Often enough fics are developing a mind of their own, don't they? But that's good! Long and angsty is good! :))
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Oooh, poor Derek! *g*
I'm starting to have a fairly stocked list of threesome fics: Michael/Lincoln/Sara, Michael/Lincoln/Sucre, Michael/Lincoln/Veronica, Lincoln/Sara/Jane, and now this one... *facepalm*
Mind of its own indeed *nods* It was supposed to be short and crackastic but also show Lincoln and Derek 'playing' with Michael - well, they do play with him, but I had in mind a totally different balance of power. It was counting without (my tendency to write) manipulative Michael, it seems, and my OTP self since in this version, Lincoln's feelings about Michael and the situation are obvious, whereas in my initial idea, he was way more... laidback about the whole thing.
Thanks a lot, and sorry it took me so long to reply!
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