Prison Break - Drawing the Line

Apr 24, 2011 21:34

Title: Drawing the Line
Author: clair-de-lune
Fandom: Prison Break
Characters: Michael/Lincoln/Derek, Michael/Lincoln
Category: Slash
Rating: NC-17
Warning: Incest
Word Count: ~ 3505
Disclaimer: Not mine. Just borrowing them for a while.
Summary: Michael is where Lincoln draws the line.
Author’s Note: This was supposed to be short and cracktastic. It’s long and ( Read more... )

fanfic: english, fic: one shot, pairing: michael/lincoln, category: slash, fandom: prison break, category: pwp, pairing: other pairings, category: threesome

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e_chance_woods April 27 2011, 13:54:41 UTC
Once again, you've got so much going on. I love all the moments of "should I...I really shouldn't...." that melt into erotic moments laced with feelings just far-removed enough from guilt to make the situation work. I love how they give in to the moment, postponing thoughts about tomorrow, and how the scenario wouldn't work if there weren't that certain balance of attraction and trust ( ... )

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clair_de_lune April 27 2011, 20:29:15 UTC
Your comment made me smile for a few of reasons. Partly because it's a really nice and kind one that happens at just the right moment. But mostly because of what you say in your second paragraph.

First, the "slutty" word was tossed around with my beta. It's a word I don't like too much and rarely use, but that seemed fitting in this case - in a short-hand way for "knows what he wants and needs, and doesn't really care how it looks".

Second because of Lincoln being in control, yet not, yet yes, yet... It's exactly the feeling I had when writing the story - it's often true but especially here. I can't decide which of them has the "upper hand", if one of them indeed has it. I guess they both need each other, which makes them co-dependent even if they don't realize it? Michael needs Lincoln, obviously, but Lincoln doesn't want to let him go either. Um so, to not answer your question... I don't know how I do it because actually, I can't help thinking it may be as confusing for the reader as it is for me *g*

And third, because of that: ( ... )

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e_chance_woods April 28 2011, 13:24:19 UTC
Hey! I'm glad my words evoked a smile somewhere across the map. I hesitate to comment--feel like I ramble too much--and I actually don't comment on anyone's stuff but yours. Clearly in this case it was worth it :)

I really enjoyed the subtle brushstrokes of Lincoln and Derek's friendship..boundaries pushed, trust levels leaned on, and a secret shared in the most delicious way. Who knows where manly kisses might lead, especially with a good buddy who's not only a great sport about unorthodox family ties but also has a great ass. You are 100% ON board, Clair De Lune!

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clair_de_lune April 28 2011, 19:01:52 UTC
Why, first, thanks :) Second, don't worry, I don't feel like you were rambling. The main risk is that you end up with a long-winded reply from me ;) But given I've been procrastinating posting fics because the fandom sometimes seems too quiet to even bother, I appreciate feedback - short, long, thoughtful, squee-full, whatever - and I doubt other writers would mind it.

Yay if Derek and Lincoln's friendship came across despite me shifting focus. And 'great sport' indeed since he freaked out a bit, but not nearly as much as you could have expected ;)

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tuesdaeschild April 27 2011, 17:27:24 UTC
Thoroughly enjoyed it again!

Michael in slutty-mode is a wonderful thing! And yet he and Lincoln are still very much connected on an emotional and fraternal level, even if Derek is the third part of the triangle.

You're awesome at threesomes! :)

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clair_de_lune April 27 2011, 20:29:54 UTC
he and Lincoln are still very much connected on an emotional and fraternal level, even if Derek is the third part of the triangle.

You know, at first, I wanted to insist on Linc and Derek's friendship, and it's there, but not nearly as much as I'd planned it, and Michael is a lot more prominent. I guess I can't help coming back to what was the core of the show for me - OK, with quite an incestuous twist ;)

You're awesome at threesomes! :)

You shouldn't encourage me. Muse is lazy and waits to be fed prompts but sooner or later, hopefully, she'll wake up and then... there will be M/L/S stories ;)

*hugs* Foxy.

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tuesdaeschild April 30 2011, 12:29:26 UTC
I guess I can't help coming back to what was the core of the show for me - OK, with quite an incestuous twist ;)

And who implied the incestuous twist?!!! The creators of the show with their dysfunctional love line so you don't need to take the blame! And Linc's and Derek's friendship was certainly there; they shared lots of things so they were clearly best buddies. :)

but sooner or later, hopefully, she'll wake up and then there will be M/L/S stories ;)

And you're telling me not to encourage you!! ;)

*hugs you*

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clair_de_lune April 30 2011, 15:07:21 UTC
LOL, yes, we were all too happy to dwell on said subtext *g* If I was less lazy and more inspired, though, I'd try to write a different, incest-free, take on it.

And you're telling me not to encourage you!! ;)

Still no idea for fic :( The prompts last week made me write a few drabbles/ficlets but since then, even M/S/L doesn't make me write. Bad muse.

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jolietjones April 28 2011, 10:36:36 UTC
I thoroughly enjoyed this - you are very (VERY) good at writing the hawt.

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clair_de_lune April 28 2011, 19:03:20 UTC
I'm very (VERY) happy you think so ;) Thank you!
'Boy toy' icon in this context? *g*

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superboyclex May 11 2011, 11:54:41 UTC
Finally back to reading fics and oh how lucky I got by reading this first. Damn hot!

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clair_de_lune May 13 2011, 20:22:03 UTC
I'm always happy to help ;) Thanks a lot :)

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Ooooh, porn! amodalie May 15 2011, 15:52:20 UTC
Wow... I never expected a threesome with Derek could be this HOT!!!
Wonderfully written. I totally enjoyed cheeky, wanton Michael (of course! tsk, who wouldn't?) and Lincoln being torn between pure lust, and awkwardness and jealousy in front of a buddy.
Often enough fics are developing a mind of their own, don't they? But that's good! Long and angsty is good! :))

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Re: Ooooh, porn! clair_de_lune May 22 2011, 08:46:17 UTC
I never expected a threesome with Derek could be this HOT!!!
Oooh, poor Derek! *g*
I'm starting to have a fairly stocked list of threesome fics: Michael/Lincoln/Sara, Michael/Lincoln/Sucre, Michael/Lincoln/Veronica, Lincoln/Sara/Jane, and now this one... *facepalm*

Mind of its own indeed *nods* It was supposed to be short and crackastic but also show Lincoln and Derek 'playing' with Michael - well, they do play with him, but I had in mind a totally different balance of power. It was counting without (my tendency to write) manipulative Michael, it seems, and my OTP self since in this version, Lincoln's feelings about Michael and the situation are obvious, whereas in my initial idea, he was way more... laidback about the whole thing.

Thanks a lot, and sorry it took me so long to reply!

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