Prison Break - Nothing Typical

Feb 15, 2011 21:19

Title: Nothing Typical
Author: clair-de-lune
Fandom: Prison Break
Characters: Lincoln/Sara (implied Michael/Sara)
Category: Het
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: ~ 2820
Disclaimer: Not mine. Just borrowing them for a while.
Summary: Let’s get this straight: she’s Michael’s, and it’s a typical, classic, not original thing-leading-to-another-thing kind of situation.
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comm: kissbingo, fanfic: english, pairing: michael/sara, fic: one shot, pairing: lincoln/sara, fandom: prison break, category: pwp

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rosie_spleen February 15 2011, 22:28:38 UTC
Hey hon

This was all kinds of ace. LOVE the small details, like Lincoln whispering 'how' in her ear, like the 'eye' issue and his attention to the wounds

Yum, in an unusual (kinky) type of way, lol

It's been a while for me, reading PB and especially L/S. Thanks for continuing to write really enjoyable, hot stuff

xx

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lauratnz February 17 2011, 19:31:52 UTC
Hey, I know YOU

(non)guilty, wrong & reckless L/S FTW, and you know it *g*

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clair_de_lune February 18 2011, 20:20:19 UTC
Kinky? *gasps* That said, yes, it probably is. They're already too close in other ways to go there. And despite what Lincoln says, I think that to some extent, he - and probably Sara too - does do it to punish Michael. Not something he can admit, even to himself.

This is where I don't mention that I added the wounds in extremis because I had forgotten them. This is how much I blank out on S4.

I'm glad this lured you into reading a slice of Prison Break fic again and you enjoyed it :)

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tuesdaeschild February 16 2011, 13:21:28 UTC
So sex as an analgesic for pain of the soul, huh?!! Yes, I suppose it could work!

At least we know that Lincoln has the decency to feel some kind of guilt since it's from his POV but I'm certainly willing to believe that Sara's conscience was a little uneasy too. I'm glad that it wasn't hard, fast and dirty because that wouldn't have been right at all. Not that this was right exactly; but, yanno, comfort sex and all...

That said it was bloody hot!!! *fans self* Another very well written piece of smut with a modicum of plot that I thoroughly enjoyed! :)

So the sequel is where they confess to Michael, isn't it?!!! ;)

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clair_de_lune February 18 2011, 20:21:32 UTC
Given their respective histories, I guess it's less bad than falling back into addiction, right? Except perhaps if this becomes an habitude and an addiction.

Maybe I mentioned it in an email, but the fic branched out from a prompt I left for a prompt fest, and said prompt was Lincoln/Sara, quickie, secret, guilt. The 'secret' part isn't really addressed here but the guilt is, at least on Lincoln's side. But yep, I'd say when they have the time to hang around a bit with Michael (post-series because of course Michael doesn't die in my timeline ;)), it's going to be a bit awkward.

Modicum of a plot is the appropriate word, me thinks.

Confession? Um. Any idea how Michael would react? Hurt, angry, forgiving, all of this but in the end finding it kinda hot?
Oh, look! My obsessive OT3 is back ;-)

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tuesdaeschild February 19 2011, 12:00:41 UTC
I guess it's less bad than falling back into addiction, right?

Probably. I agree with you though that if this becomes an addicition...

The 'secret' part isn't really addressed here but the guilt is, at least on Lincoln's side.

Sara would definitely have felt guilt too though. *nods* You could always write it in Sara's POV!! ;)

But yep, I'd say when they have the time to hang around a bit with Michael...

'Course he didn't die! But it's cerainly going to be rather awkward when they have time together!

Modicum of a plot is the appropriate word, me thinks.

Plot, no plot, modicum of plot? Whatever, I'll take the smut any way you want to portray it! :-)

Any idea how Michael would react? Hurt, angry, forgiving, all of this but in the end finding it kinda hot?

Hmmmm...here's an odd thought. Michael being Michael is likely to blame himself and think he deserved it. That's one option and I kind of like it. In another scenario it's likely he would go through the whole range of emotions; hurt, denial, anger and probably forgiving.

but ( ... )

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clair_de_lune February 20 2011, 11:06:11 UTC
You could always write it in Sara's POV!! ;)

I wish I could because I haven't considered Sara's thoughts and I wonder about them. I already wrote a Lincoln/Sara ficlet in Sara's POV and with the same settings a while ago, but it wasn't the same mood at all.

Hmmmm...here's an odd thought. Michael being Michael is likely to blame himself and think he deserved it. That's one option and I kind of like it. In another scenario it's likely he would go through the whole range of emotions; hurt, denial, anger and probably forgiving.

You know, I think we could combine both. The whole range of emotions thing ending up with him realizing they did this because of him, and with him in mind (well... partly: I'm pretty sure Lincoln forgets a bit about him at some point), hence a guilt trip. And maybe having them perform for him because imagination running wild might be worse than reality, in his case.

Wish I could have written you some OT3 smut for your birthday. Alas, the muse seems to have gone on a round-the-world trip! *sighs*I know how ( ... )

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lauratnz February 17 2011, 19:25:37 UTC
Great one, hon!

Love the canon setting you've chosen for this, and the fact that the acknowledged 'wrongness' of it all isn't stopping either of them.

The way you have them avoiding eye contact was fantastic too. Loved this particular image "It’s indecent to stare at her like that while kissing her, seeing feelings and needs that shouldn’t be for him."

My favorite thing is perhaps the references to the (not so) brotherly feelings mixing with the attraction and the lust that are obviously there.

"inducing lust as much as a weird fondness"

Fabulous.

One of my favorites lately, this one. Thanks for that. Made me a bit melancholic even *snif* :)

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clair_de_lune February 18 2011, 20:23:35 UTC
I'm happy you liked it. Even if I'm still playing with two of the same characters, I'm a bit proud of myself for having written something else than Michael/Lincoln or Michael/Sara/Lincoln for once :-p

the fact that the acknowledged 'wrongness' of it all isn't stopping either of them.

When they indulge in their bad sides, it can be a bit of a train wreck ;)

My favorite thing is perhaps the references to the (not so) brotherly feelings mixing with the attraction and the lust that are obviously there.

It's interesting to try to write them at this point because we (well, I, at least) don't really know how much sister and brother in law-ish, friends, buddies or whatever else they feel. We can safely assume they've got closer through the show, and especially the fourth season, but they still don't have a lot of scenes in common.

Thanks for your comment :)

(Melancholy and nostalgia tend to be frequent moods when PB is involved *sigh*)

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