Prison Break - Long-Term Thanks

[clair_de_lune]

Title: Long-Term Thanks
Author: clair-de-lune
Fandom: Prison Break
Characters: Michael/Lincoln/Sucre
Category: Slash
Rating: NC-17
Warning: Incest
Word Count: ~ 710
Disclaimer: Not mine. Just borrowing them for a while.
Summary/ Prompt by yoruichiyoshi12 in comment_fic: The brothers’ way of saying thank you, Michael/Lincoln/Sucre or Michael/Lincoln/Sara. This one is for Michael/Lincoln/

Comments

[velvetburrs]

"Sucre would say he yields, but yielding would imply that he tried to fight either them or the need they elicit; he didn’t. He’s taken up the offer and now basks in it."

Gah. I love this! And I nerdily absolutely *love* the way you used the subtleties of language to really hit home.

[clair_de_lune]

Oh, thanks a lot. It's such a nice thing to say.
He did yield, didn't he? Sure didn't fight them too hard ;)

[poisonsprincess]

You made me a very happy woman! I loved this. I could picture everything perfectly-- the words you chose flowed so well. These three are probably one of my favorite pairings. Thanks so much for posting it!

[clair_de_lune]

Hehe, happy I made you happy ;)

the words you chose flowed so well
... And this is where I swagger a bit - and my beta kindly mocks me - because I had a limted amount of characters allowed, and I don't always do too well with this kind of limit. So, so nice to hear it flows in an okay way nonetheless :D

[e_chance_woods]

Oh, I'm so glad I checked LJ today! :D

I love Sucre's insistence on just hands, and his elastic definition of what's shocking and/or worthy of reflection. Their sexual dynamic complements their dynamic in canon so beautifully. I could picture this perfectly, and feel the urgency and playful power manipulations (which I love...The Plan gives way to the strength of Hand on Neck/Back etc. while the man being thanked and serviced is clearly the weakest point in the triangle...all of it, so enticing to read and so true to character).

I love the character of Sucre so much. This was truly a wonderful surprise. I will NEVER complain when you pick prompts with that deliciously amazing guy! Thanks for writing and sharing.

[clair_de_lune]

his elastic definition of what's shocking and/or worthy of reflection
He's just swept off his feet ;) Or in other words, caught a bit off guard, both by what the brothers do to him and by how much he enjoys it, and he quickly forgets to think too hard.

the weakest point in the triangle
It's always Michael&Lincoln vs him, I guess. Not necessarily in a bad way - in this case, they use their "powers" for good, so to speak - but no matter what Sucre shares with Michael, it can't beat what Michael and Lincoln have. And it shows.

This was a suprise for me too because I already wrote M/L/Sucre not so long ago and didn't think I'd do it again, not so soon anyway, but you know... the prompt made me do it ;)

Thanks a lot for the wonderful feedback :)

[amodalie]

*gasp*

My, oh my, I totally forgot breathing... phew... *tries to regain breath*

Okay. Better now. ;) This is sooooooo brilliant!!! Imagine my surprise when I read your PM this morning, and followed the link. Guh! Before my jaw dropped and I forgot breathing my face was beaming brightly by the way. What an awesome surprise!!!

Whoa, Michael and Lincoln saying Thank You... Now isn't Sucre a hell of a lucky guy?! I absolutely love your description of Sucre realising one by one all the implications. He is torn between thinking and just enjoying it, which means it must be a good thing he doesn't look too deep into this can of worms. On the other hand, if he did... well, possible it comes down again to this:

"His cellmate is just that kind of twisted.Yup. And his big brother is, too! :D

[clair_de_lune]

Belated indeed. *whispers* I hoped that you being abraod for a few weeks would give me enough time to write something "less belated", but I'm afraid my muses weren't cooperative. Luckily, they've finally woken up ;)

They certainly have a lot of thanks to give Sucre, or at least a few of apologies.
The ficlet extrapolates quite a bit, but Michael is twisted. Especially S1 Michael. When it involves Sucre, I can't help thinking of "devil on the wall" scene and that other scene in the riots episode when he asks Sucre if losing Maricruz wouldn't be worst than the bad idea of causing a lockdown. That said, yes, Lincoln looks almost as bad as his brother here

[tuesdaeschild]

A thought occurs to me...maybe Sucre might not want to look into that can of worms but there's nothing stopping us...Mwahahaha!!

Another hot and lovely 3some, sweetheart!! *licks lips*

[clair_de_lune]

Hold that thought! It's a brilliant one *g* There's nothing stopping us, indeed, and we've looked into it quite a few times and hopefully will do it again, especially given my tendency to write a same prompt twice ;)

[tuesdaeschild]

Right!! Holding the thought! And it is true we've looked into it more than once and will do so again! :-)

especially given my tendency to write a same prompt twice ;)

I love your tendency to write a same prompt twice! Variety is the spice of life! ;)