Prison Break - The Tighter Trap

Aug 28, 2010 19:18

Title: The Tighter Trap
Author: clair-de-lune
Fandom: Prison Break
Characters: Michael/Lincoln, a hint of Michael/Sara
Category: Slash
Rating: R
Warning: Incest
Word Count: ~ 630
Disclaimer: Not mine. Just borrowing them for a while.
Summary: Lincoln knows Michael is telling the truth when he says that he loves them...
Author’s Note: Written for pbreak_drabbles - prompt: ( Read more... )

fanfic: english, pairing: michael/sara, fic: one shot, comm: pbreak_drabbles, pairing: michael/lincoln, category: slash, fandom: prison break, category: pwp, writing: bleeding cuticles

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tuesdaeschild August 29 2010, 16:27:27 UTC
A deliciously obnoxious Michael in some respects...but it would still be difficult to refuse the hottie, wouldn't it?

I loved Sara's equal measure of lust and loathing! And recalling Michael's terror of dark closets, even if he's desperate for Lincoln to fuck him in one, added a kinky little frisson.

Good job, dear!

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clair_de_lune August 30 2010, 18:53:03 UTC
He probably knows they won't be able to refuse him; it's the most obnoxious part. That and dragging Sara into the mess, which takes the cake biscuit (see? I'm going for British English *g*) For all the M/L only paragrahs, it can always be argued that it partially depends on Lincoln's take on the situation. But dragging Sara into the mess... not nice.

A few years ago, I wrote a closet/Michael/Lincoln fic, Shifting Perceptions. It's not the moment I was referring to here - if only because the setting was different - but I definitely had that other story in mind while writing.

*bows to beta*

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tuesdaeschild September 7 2010, 13:24:28 UTC
which takes the cake biscuit (see? I'm going for British English *g*)

That's the ticket!! *g*

Michael is definitely not nice in this!!

And no need to bow to the beta...the beta enjoys her job!! :)

*runs off to check out link*

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clair_de_lune September 1 2010, 19:56:30 UTC
Glad I made you gleeful ;)

I said the other day in a friend's LJ that Michael always was a manipulative, needy, obsessive, etc. character, even though the writers used to make us - well, me anyway - root for him. I'm afraid this ficlet is the consequence of that comment...

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flwrpwr_vampyre September 1 2010, 17:15:47 UTC
It's amazing how much sexy you manage to cram into each of these paragraphs. I love how you see the story progress through all of them.

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clair_de_lune September 1 2010, 19:58:01 UTC
I didn't intend to write smutt for that challenge... Fully succeeded, as you can see ;)

Michael's obsessions and demands only get bigger with time, which matches what he became in the fourth season... I think - I'm a bit at loss with S4 characterizations.

Thank you :)

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e_chance_woods September 8 2010, 05:37:16 UTC
I love the thread of discomfort and unpleasantness that runs from scenario to scenario, while the complicated web of love, manipulation, and sexuality continually overrides their discomfort. I feel sympathy for everyone caught in the tightening trap, including Michael himself. Those obsessively controlling manipulations of his caused him so much pain, and cost him quite a bit. (Just how much it cost him depends on how far you're willing to take the Canon Ride. I personally don't take it all the way to the end of season 4).

I'm glad I caught this one. Those Inception communities I was watching made my friends list fill up like crazy. I ended up cleaning all of that off my flist, and here you were! :D

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clair_de_lune September 11 2010, 13:35:27 UTC
Thank you!

the complicated web
This. They're quite co-dependent. It's not only Michael always needing and maniptulating, it's also that Lincoln - and then Sara - caves in and gives in him what he wants. Not that it would be easy to say no, but as long as they yield, he'll keep asking for more. I don't know how successful I was, but I tried to write it as something spiralling down.

I personally don't take it all the way to the end of season 4
I know the feeling too ;)

Those lively fandoms... I miss this kind of craziness, or at least some aspects of it. FWIW, I post a recap of my fic each month - apparently, I'm fond of listing certain things. It's the fanfic: monthly tag or something like that.

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Gorgeous velvetburrs October 5 2010, 02:02:21 UTC
I love all your Linc/Michael fics! They're so deliciously hot while still exquisitely in character and well written - lovelovelove!

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Re: Gorgeous clair_de_lune October 5 2010, 19:06:38 UTC
Hi! It's so nice to see new people around here. I'm happy you're enjoying the fics. Thanks for dropping a comment :D

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Re: Gorgeous velvetburrs October 6 2010, 01:41:07 UTC
Hi to you too :) I'm a long-time fan of prison break, but I've only ever really delved into the Supernatural fandom. It's really great to see that a linc/michael fandom exists, especially how it appears to be more quality over quantity!
I am definitely loving your fics :) You're a fantastic writer!

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Re: Gorgeous clair_de_lune October 8 2010, 20:28:47 UTC
There used to be a more active fandom but sadly, with the last seasons being... what they were and the ending of the show, a lot of fic authors' muses were killed :(

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