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Prison Break - Thrice in a Blue Moon

Jul 01, 2010 21:40

Title: Thrice in a Blue Moon
Author: clair-de-lune
Characters: Michael/Sara/Lincoln
Category: Het, mild slash
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: Not mine. Just borrowing them for a while.
Summary: If, uncharacteristically, you ever chicken out and need to blame it on something, you will rely on the tux. And on the cigar, too. (Post-series, non-epilogue-compliant)
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fanfic: english, pairing: michael/sara, fic: one shot, pairing: michael/lincoln, category: slash, fandom: prison break, fic: blue moon, category: pwp, category: threesome, category: non-epilogue-compliant, pairing: michael/sara/lincoln, pairing: lincoln/sara

Comments 21

melanyebaggins July 2 2010, 23:50:38 UTC

I would have been disappointed if this *hadn't* been the eventual outcome of this series :P Very well done ^_^

clair_de_lune July 3 2010, 22:46:45 UTC

It took me several months to dare going there (I actually started to write this one before the second "part") but indeed, how could have it ended otherwise? :-p
Thanks for dropping a note :)

melanyebaggins July 4 2010, 03:22:10 UTC

<3 you have more courage than I, my friend :) I love reading your stuff because of that ^_^

clair_de_lune July 4 2010, 20:11:35 UTC

It's not courage, it's fic gnawing at my brain so relentlessly I finally had to give in *g*

e_chance_woods July 3 2010, 07:19:30 UTC

Very nice. I love all of your play with boundaries, roles, taboos, etc. I rarely read "het", but this series of yours defies categorization. The eroticism comes from the pushing and erasing of boundary lines rather than the interplay between people of traditionally defined genders. And I like it ^^;;

I also like how you don't shy away from Sara feeling uncomfortable/queasy at the exact same time she feels aroused (regarding the brotherly love). That truthfulness gives the situations emotional and erotic depth, and I give you credit for subtly and skillfully weaving it in.

No pressure--I'm sure you have a million real life issues to attend to--but I really do love seeing submissions from you hit my inbox. Thank you again for taking the time to write and share.

clair_de_lune July 3 2010, 22:47:13 UTC

Well, it is a series in which men dress as women and women as men, although nobody dressed at all in Lincoln's POV *g* More seriously, I agree with you: there is a certain appeal in the twisted, the murky, the ambiguity... It's great to hear it shows here and works for you. And it is, at least openly, het for the essential, but I guess that, fondling and almost-kssing set aside, the incestuous/slashy overtones are quite pregnant.

As much as I love Sara, and Sara/Michael, there's no way she doesn't know it's not all about her here and does't find it somewhat entincing; she wouldn't have gone so far otherwise. On the other hand, I can't picture her totally rolling with it, so Sara being both aroused and uncomfortable seemed appropriate. I had way too much fun writing this murky aspect, but the way you put it - emotional and erotic depth - is more flattering for me ;) And I'm glad you think that ( ... )

tuesdaeschild July 4 2010, 18:57:16 UTC

Bloody Hell, lady!! This was so hot I think it made my browser crash! Something did, anyway!!

I truly love the way you write. And I adore how far you push the boundaries with hints of breaking them completely!

And the almost-Michael/Lincoln was beautifully done!!

You remember how Linc and you pampered and so delicately handled Michael when the situation was reversed not so long ago; you wonder if Michael felt the same back then.

I really loved the contrast between this and how Sara was treated in this Third Blue Moon! It certainly connects the series perfectly and felt in syncopation with everything that has gone before.

You really have done a great job with this series and you really are one of the great exponents of teh kinky in the fandom!!

Outstanding!! And hot! And very, very naughty...which was one of the reasons I loved it so much!! Great stuff!

More from me at the end of the week! For now, keep writing!
*hugs*

clair_de_lune July 9 2010, 19:36:06 UTC

Was it Miss CrankyPants' browser or the shiny laptop's? Me thinks the shiny latop is way too young to read display this kinf of stuff ;)

And I adore how far you push the boundaries with hints of breaking them completely!
I didn't want to make it openly slashy, but they can't "share" like this and keep incestuous overtones totally at large, can they? As for as far Sara goes, it was the logical outcome - maybe not exactly like this but you know what I mean.

the contrast between this and how Sara was treated in this Third Blue Moon!
It mirrors :-p I only thought of it while trying to reply to your comment, but even though they pampered Michael, they - especially Linc - didn't give him a choice about what was allowed in the end. No male bits to please (pleasure?) her. While in the third blue moon, they kind of manhandled Sara but followed her lead.

It certainly connects the series perfectly and felt in syncopation with everything that has gone before.I tend to be a bit fussy about this kind of thing :-p I didn't think I would write ' ( ... )

tuesdaeschild July 11 2010, 16:40:17 UTC

Miss CrankyPants' browser!! I really must get the router tomorrow!! *makes mental note to order it online tonight* That way it's cheaper!!

I do feel you're right that the shiny laptop is way too young to display and/or read the kinkier stuff!! *giggles* Miss CrankyPants, on the other hand, has seen it all before and then some!!

but they can't "share" like this and keep incestuous overtones totally at large, can they?

Absolutely. Being so close physically and doing lots of rather naughty stuff makes the next step into incest completely predictable! They are very sexual creatures, these three! And I have the feeling that Sara is willing to push them further!

No male bits to please (pleasure?) her.

Both are correct! Though I think of the two pleasure sounds a little naughtier! ;) And you're right; despite the 'manhandling' (that's kind of a pun!!) Sara was pretty demanding and wasn't afraid to call the shots.

I didn't think I would write 'sequels' for the first Blue Moon, but since I did, they had to relate to the first story ( ... )

clair_de_lune July 11 2010, 18:11:10 UTC

Oooh, Captain Kirk and the tribbles *g*

Shiny laptop should start with nicer, pg-13 rated stuff *nods* Does he or she have a name, by the way?

Given this series was never meant to have open, in-your-face Michael/Lincoln, they probably don't need another "step". The sharing itself, not to mention the occasional fondling, is already good bad and taking things further enough :-p

Okay, I suppose that's what sequels are, techinically!

Hm, well, technically, I'll have to agree ;-) The three stories can be read as one shots, but the characters go bit further into intimacy and the smut with each fic there's a progression in their relationships.

It wasn't planned, but I don't mind having written sequels. The only thing is, now, my title may sound off since it obviously happened more often than once in a blue moon *g* There are hints in the second and third blue moon that it happened more than twice or thrice, maybe that it actually happens on a (semi-) regular basis ( ... )

Thread 8

spunkyar July 7 2010, 05:05:19 UTC

Just wow! There are no other words that come to mind at this moment. Loved this!! :)

clair_de_lune July 7 2010, 19:18:12 UTC

Aww, you're using my threesome trio icon *g*

Well, as long as making you speechless is a good thing... *gloats* Thanks a lot for the read and the comment :)

spunkyar July 11 2010, 14:29:15 UTC

I love love love that icon! :)

It's speechless in a wonderful great way!!

Thank you for sharing. :)

lizparker6 August 9 2010, 12:37:46 UTC

I cannot help but feeling a little conservative whenever reading your work, lol, but still, It...hem...turns me on. A never read stuff like this, unless, obviously, it comes from you, and I never regret doing so, despite it feeling a bit strange, maybe a bit like crossing my own personal boundaries at times, yet not regretting it, kind of like in your stories ( ... )

clair_de_lune August 10 2010, 16:36:45 UTC

I am conservative ;) Kind of. In a "whatever suit your fancy, I just really don't need to know about it" way, at least, and it took me months to decide to write the fanfic. Less because of the threesome itself than because of Sara's position in it - literaly. When you think about it, it's not that graphic, it's really... the positioning that still makes me facepalm. On the other hand, I had never planned to write sequels for the first Blue Moon, but once started, it seemed logic for me that it ended in such a way.

I love how she is ready to experiment and grant them what they want

In the case of this specific fic, it's at least as much taking what she wants than granting them what they want ;) although they're quite happy and eager to comply. I'll admit it's not so clear with the kiss at the end: she kind of gives them the green light, if not pushes them, but her position is a bit mixed.

despite all this,I enjoyed reading every bit of this.It's okay ;) My PB fangirlism has decreased now, but when it was really bad, I used to read ( ... )