Prison Break - Twice in a Blue Moon

[clair_de_lune]

Title: Twice in a Blue Moon
Author: clair-de-lune
Characters: Michael/Sara/Lincoln (Lincoln/Sara, Michael/Sara, mild Michael/Lincoln)
Categories: Het, slash
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: ~ 3610
Disclaimer: Not mine. Just borrowing them for a while.
Summary: The thought has thrived in your minds. Sometimes consciously and sometimes not, the three of you have fed it

Comments

[melanyebaggins]

dude. I come onto LJ for the first time in over a week and see this in my flist?? You are made of AWESOME :D *saves to read later* I'll comment again once I've read ^_^

[clair_de_lune]

See how they welcome you back? By being naked and smutty *shakes head* ;)

[melanyebaggins]

*tsk tsk tsk* at this rate, they'll never get rid of me :P

This was...wow. Just the perfect bedtime story, it was, and just enough squicky kinkiness to make me squirm a little :D You have a real talent for Linc/Sara stuff ;) Well done!

[clair_de_lune]

I'm afraid you're right about the "squicky kinkiness", even more so if Michael/Lincoln isn't your (general "your") thing. Glad I made you squirm a little *g*

Thanks for your kind words, and I hope you had pleasant dreams ;-)

[e_chance_woods]

I don't care for second-person all that much, but I still really enjoyed this. I love how you write power struggles, teasing, and sexual undercurrents. Your stories flow so seamlessly from canon, the way you capture the brothers' manner of speaking and their unorthodox bond. I can so easily visualize them doing and saying the things you describe (sexual or otherwise).

It's difficult for me to read Sara in a PWP only because "canon" Sara struck me as so inconsistent. It's hard for me to read her as a fully realized character, although stories like this work very well since the main impressions of Sara are reflected from Michael and Link's visions of her.

Too long, too long...Didn't mean to babble. I'm just so thrilled to have another story from you. I really enjoyed it. (My favorite parts were Michael being bossy, rubbing up against his brother, and not needing Sara's help at the end. I fear this might mean my perv factor is dangerously high.)

Thanks so much for writing and sharing!

[clair_de_lune]

Usually, I'm not too big on second-person either, but this fic is part of a 'triad' of stories: it inherited the point of view from the first one, in which it worked rather well, IMO. I wanted a certain unity between the three stories and I kept this voice.

Your stories flow so seamlessly from canon

Thanks so much for this. Not really the kind of situation we'd see in canon, so it's great if it retains a canon-like feel.

although stories like this work very well since the main impressions of Sara are reflected from Michael and Link's visions of her

The funny thing is it's something that bugged me a bit. At some point, I felt as if she wasn't really "there" with them.
Luckily, someone's hindrance is someone else's positive aspect :-p

I fear this might mean my perv factor is dangerously high.

It's okay. I wrote those things, so I'm afraid my perv factor is even higher *sigh*

Thank you for the comment, and happy you enjoyed the fic.

[e_chance_woods]

The world is a better place because of your perv factor.

Your stories are weaving themselves into my own personal canon. You've been very helpful in my mental process of completely rejecting the unwanted AU crack-attack story arcs from seasons 1-4.

On a completely related side note, did you know Wentworth Miller was in an episode of Buffy s2 called "Go Fish"? I rewatched that episode the other day and it was soooooo funny :D :D :D That guy is so *Michael* to me that I was dying seeing him as some crabby swim team high school guy, calling people "dude."

Sorry for the segue. Dude.

[clair_de_lune]

"Making the world a better place, one smutty story at a time." Could be a motto, couldn't it? *g*

You've been very helpful in my mental process of completely rejecting the unwanted AU crack-attack story arcs from seasons 1-4.
I must say that I have practice at ignoring certain plot lines, and I'm really flattered but, seriously, it's too much. S4 did such a good job of making itself rejectable ;)

I've heard he'd been on Buffy, yes, but I've never watched the show and I'm an awful fangirl: I love the PB characters, but I'm not interested enough in the actors to watch them in something I wouldn't usually watch.

No worries, dude(tte) ;)

[foophile]

Now, even though Michael’s encouragements drive you deeper into her mouth, it’s for her and her only, and reciprocally. Maybe this is precisely the reason why Michael’s appreciative murmur lasts and grows rawer. He likes seeing you like this, but then, this is what all of you wanted, wasn’t it?

This killed me. DED kind of killing. I love how Linc thinks, completely at home with this idea but understanding at the same time how badly this could all go. But again, be okay with almost everything. I love Linc a little caught off guard by his own feelings.

The little bastard grins and handles you as cautiously as if you were some sort of luxurious gift. You can’t decide whether it’s flattering or humiliating; you can’t bring yourself to push him away either.I grinned so wide at this part just thinking about how Linc couldn't keep his hands off of Michael in the first Blue Moon. Linc has no idea that Michael is just reciprocating and it's so hot

[clair_de_lune]

I love how Linc thinks, completely at home with this idea but understanding at the same time how badly this could all go.This was my meager attempt at implying that at some point maybe-perhaps-possibly things might go a bit awry in paradise. I didn't insist too much, as you could see ;-) We've had enough things going awry in the show. And to be fair, even Lincoln who's not known to always make the best choices, has to picture the potential disaster. But apparently, potential disaster can't compete with what's offered