Prison Break - Kiss Me Good Night

[clair_de_lune]

Title: Kiss Me Good Night ( French version)
Author: clair-de-lune
Characters: Michael, Lincoln, Sara, Veronica, Sucre, Christina Rose
Pairings: Michael/Sara, a dash of one-sided Michael/Veronica
Categories: Gen, het
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: ~ 2445
Disclaimer: Not mine. Just borrowing them for a while.
Summary: Settling in bed for the night is a meticulous task

Comments

[dani101]

Lovely fic!:)))))

[clair_de_lune]

Thanks a lot :D

[tuesdaeschild]

After Miss CrankyPants had finished performing it left too little time to read this!! *pokes tongue out at Miss CrankyPants*

Back soon though! :)

[clair_de_lune]

Naughty Miss CrankyPants. I bet she wants her mama's full attention ;)
Anytime, Foxy.

[tuesdaeschild]

Yep, Miss CrankyPants is always demanding her poor frustrated Mama's attention!! She's not happy unless I'm trying to figure out why she is being so cranky! *groans feelingly*

Anyway, I'd said I'd be back soon and here I am! :)

I love it! It's kind of sweet, kind of cute and kind of sad...but with a very happy ending that completely ignores (thanks to you taking your time to translate this one!) the ridiculousness of Season 4!! That version of Christina Rose was an imposter, right?!!

I can so identify with Michael and when you're a kid of course you want to keep something that you love, and find comfort in, forever.

My Dad used to tuck me in a bit like Michael's Mom did for him and I felt safe from the monsters I felt sure were lurking in the shadowy reccesses of my bedroom. It was a little trip down memory lane for me, though my trips take more time these days...my memory lane is very long

[clair_de_lune]

It looks like Miss CrankyPants is doing her best to live up to her name ;)

It's kind of sweet, kind of cute and kind of sad...but with a very happy ending
I wanted it a bit bitter-sweet so I guess... I succeeded.

Hm, what season 4? What version of Christina Rose? I'm sorry, I can't hear you.

By the way, in the French version of the fic, instead of merely 'exploring in the dark' Sara was 'trying to find out where the tattoo ends'. I sligthly rewrote this to avoid any mentions of said tattoo *grumbles* Yep, still grudgeful about the tattoo FAIL. The fact that I watched 4.0 dvd commentary a few days ago doesn't help either.

My Dad used to tuck me in a bit like Michael's Mom did for him and I felt safe from the monsters I felt sure were lurking in the shadowy reccesses of my bedroom.Aww *hugs* I don't think I usually had a big issue with the monsters, but the part where Michael hates having creases in his sheets or not be properly tucked in? *raises hand* I so totally get this. I was - still am to some extent - a bit fussy about that

[e_chance_woods]

Thank you so much for taking the time to craft such enjoyable stories that flow so seamlessly from canon. I love feeling like I'm getting a deeper, more intimate look into these characters I love (regardless of pairing, as long as the pairing feels ~true~).

I also like having the opportunity to picture Michael relaxed and happy, so thank you for that too :D

[clair_de_lune]

Um... It's not so much that I 'took the time' than the fact that at some point, I couldn't prevent them from gushing at an alarming pace :-p It's harder now, sadly, but this one is the translation of something I wrote a couple of years ago in my mother tongue. Back then, I could still fully enjoy canon and dwell on it - a lot.

I also like having the opportunity to picture Michael relaxed and happy
That's the beauty of fanfic, isn't it: you can use or ignore canon as much as you like ;) As far as I'm concerned, S4 felt so off that I have no qualms ignoring anything I didn't like in it.

My pleasure :) Thank you for reading and commenting.

[e_chance_woods]

I'm always late to the party when it comes to TV series! I like to wait until they're a few years (or more) into it, then watch a bunch of seasons all at once on DVD (like the obsessive maniac that I am.) The downside is, I'm not around when the fandoms are really active. I was so glad to see new submissions to this community, but it looks like yours are not so new! Regardless, I love them and am grateful for them.

As for season four, I view it as AU fanfiction. As long as Sucre's running around being charming and calling people "Papi" you can consider me signed up. Doesn't he also whore himself out in Vegas in S4 :D :D :D? I reject anything and everything having to do with Michael's health and well-being, but I'll enjoy the rest of the crackfest.

That comment might have been longer than your ficlet @__@

[clair_de_lune]

Oh, no. This is one is a translation (I was feeling nostalgic and picked something from my old stash), but most of my submissions *are* brand new ones. One I posted recently - and you commented on, I think - is a translation too but of a new fic. I still write, less than I used to and sometimes it takes me ages to finish the story, but... still writing new stuff, mostly Michael/Lincoln in one way or another.

As for season four, I view it as AU fanfiction.
I tend to have this feeling too - and I wouldn't say it was good AU fanfiction.

Doesn't he also whore himself out in Vegas in S4 :D :D :D?
He did. Where Sara and her bikini failed, he succeeded ;-)

[lizparker6]

Oh Clair, what a wonderful fic.:) I love these kind of fics - a slice through a life of a person, always refering to one thing in different timelines, and you so perfectly mastered that!

Also, comparing Sara to michael's own personal cute moster was a very nice touch.:)

Had a very good laugh when reading about the part where linc and michael had to sleep under pink and flowery sheets, lol.:)

Wonderful work!Thank you for sharing this with us.

[clair_de_lune]

Thanks so much :) I love those too, both writing and reading them. I think that, somehow, it appeals to the (small) logical and neat part of my brain because I used that 'trick' in a few ficlets.

Had a very good laugh when reading about the part where linc and michael had to sleep under pink and flowery sheets, lol.:)
I must say I have a soft spot for that image ;)

I'm happy you liked it. Thanks for the feedback, Liz :)

[msgenevieve]

*loves this fic and your brain like woah*

[clair_de_lune]

lol, thank you. It was my old brain and I miss it - miss writing this kind of fic. Glad you enjoyed it :D