Prison Break - Once in a Blue Moon

[clair_de_lune]

Title: Once in a Blue Moon
Author: clair-de-lune
Characters: Michael/Sara/Lincoln (Michael/Sara, mild Michael/Lincoln, a tiny bit of Lincoln/Sara)
Categories: Het, slash
Rating: R
Word Count: ~ 2435
Disclaimer: Not mine. Just borrowing them for a while.
Summary: You do weird, crazy things on blue moon nights. You talk your wife into experimenting, become caught

Comments

[cybeleadam]

Ah, la fameuse fic à la deuxième personne ! Je trouve que ça marche très bien, ces "you" partout. Et l'idée de départ est très "crackfic", il faut le reconnaître, mais c'est quand même écrit dans un style aussi bon qu'une fic sérieuse. D'ailleurs, ça faisait longtemps que je n'avais plus pris le temps de lire une de tes fics... Je retrouve ton style avec plaisir. ^^ En plus, tu disais que tu regrettais que ce ne soit pas assez "réfléchi" mais quand même, ça l'est au moins un peu. Ou, en tout cas, ça en a l'air.

[clair_de_lune]

C'est elle. En chair et en os, si je puis dire. Et les 'you' n'arrêtent pas de me suivre, désormais : j'ai du mal à repasser à la troisième personne...

L'idée de base est pour le moins crackastic, en effet, mais étant donné que la fic m'a très vite échappé et n'était pas aussi lofouque que prévu, j'ai joué le jeu et essayé de la traiter aussi sérieusement que possible *g*

Ou, en tout cas, ça en a l'air
J'obsessionne un peu sur le fait que j'aurais pu avoir un 'fil rouge' plus solide/évident, mais ça se tient malgré tout, je suppose :-p

[cybeleadam]

Comme on ne peut même pas dire "en encre et en papier" pour un texte publié sur Internet, je ne vois pas trop par quoi on pourrait remplacer "en chair et en os"... "En mots et en phrases" ? lol

Mais oui, bien sûr, que ça se tient quand même !

[clair_de_lune]

"En mots et en phrases" ?

lol, les grands esprits se recontrent, j'avais songé à presque exactement la même chose - en lettres et en mots ^_^

[tuesdaeschild]

If this is all my fault I'll gladly take the blame!!! And the funniest thing is I responded to the question about the waist cincher/waspie!! *giggles*

You have been incredibly clever in the way you set this up! It is all so 'normal' in a kinky way (does that make sense?!!) and Lincoln's reaction was priceless!! The way he treated Michael as he would a real woman was really very hot!!

How I loved it when it got all hot and dirty and the idea that Michael was fulfilling a fantasy of Sara's too worked perfectly! And of course Michael would make a hot babe...even if he's Ken and not Barbie!

yes, here too, holding your breath because even though Sara is a doctor and has a steady hand, it’s a piece of equipment you’re quite fond of. The comforting thing is she likes it, at least as much as you do, and is so careful around it.

That was fantastic

[clair_de_lune]

I responded to the question about the waist cincher/waspie!! *giggles*
And I didn't even use the term you gave me *shuffles* The nice lady who beta this told me she'd never heard of 'waspie' actually, so I thought that maybe it was a case of British English vs American English.
To be honest, I didn't think you would see the entry with the lingerie question since you were vacationing ;) and I didn't think to make it private after someone had given me a link to Wikipedia. Apparently, I'm sneaky, but not sneaky enough.

The way he treated Michael as he would a real woman was really very hot!!
This wasn't 'femslash', but I thought you wouldn't mind Lincoln being around ;)
As for the fact that the crossdressing also fulfills Sara's fantasy, I kinda like the complicity it implies between the two of them.
I still have to write a Michael/Sara/Lincoln fic with actual slash, though. And just to be fair, maybe get Sara into a tux someday.The couple of paragraphs I cut out were here initially because I wanted to make it clear that things between

[tuesdaeschild]

Firstly, let me clarify that I do know the difference between I/you/he...my confusion in calling this third person was solely down to the fact that I was blinded by the amazing images you painted of all three characters!!! I've been picturing these scenes in my mind's eye ever since!!

No worries about not using waspie...it must be a peculiarly English term. After all, I'm not ignorant of the fact that the English are peculiar!! ;) It was a good call sticking with the American English version...but it's still hilarious that I should respond to the question and still have no clue what you were planning so I still think you're incredibly sneaky!!! It doesn't help that I'm ridiculously stupid gullible! *giggles*

This wasn't 'femslash', but I thought you wouldn't mind Lincoln being around ;)

No, not 'femslash' but don't you think it's a genre all on it's own? Fem-m-ale/Slash or something?!! And no, I didn't mind at all that Lincoln was present since he was clearly enjoying himself!! He definitely finds it sexier than it should be but

[clair_de_lune]

lol, don't worry, I had understood what you meant and that it was a typo (if I had to count *my* typos...) I'm pretty sure you know your pronouns *hugs*

Fem-m-ale/Slash? I like the way you put it *g*

Hmmm, I wonder what Sara would think about Lincoln taking things further on another 'blue moon' night?!!!

Stop it, you evil lady! I was a bit tempted to have Lincoln take care of Michael while Michael was taking care of Sara *facepalm* and I valiantly resisted because I didn't want to make the fic too incest heavy, and wanted it to focus on the 'femslash'.
Something like that might still happen in the future though. When I'll have made my mind about the logistics of slashy Michael/Lincoln/Sara, anyway :-p

The idea of strapped-on Sara isn't too squicky, but to be honest, not really enticing to me either. I don't think I can do Michael/Sara with kinkier, more extreme kinks. Most of the time, I can't do really graphic Michael/Sara at all :-p

Except in my little world of Papi/Nando where Sucre loves Michael too!!I'm not the biggest

[clair_de_lune]

the crack-kinky/disturbing-and-yet-so-amusing-threesome-situation in a PB fic
LOL, thanks a lot. In my defense, intially, it wasn't supposed to be so 'threesome-y'. Just Michael and Sara. OK, Michael was dolled up, but at least, no Lincoln. It got a bit out of hand at some point, apparently :-p

Je ne suis pas toujours fan des fics écrites à la seconde personne, et je ne m'étais jamais risquée à en écrire une - ou alors, je ne m'en souviens pas. Mais ça collait avec l'atmosphère un peu spéciale, et ça m'évitait les pronoms masculins pour désigner Michael, ce qui était 'achement bienvenu dans ce contexte.

Et en ce qui concerne la suggestion du “get Michael into a dress and write ‘femslash’ with a twisted kink”, et bien c'est pari gagné! LOL
Hum. Un échange de commentaires avec Foxy sur une fic Sara/Sofia, et Michael se retrouve en talons aiguilles ^__^

Vu les entrées sur ma f-list, il semblerait que ce soit ton anniversaire : joyeux anniversaire, donc :)

[mystressxoxo]

*happy sigh* This is so, so good!

My favorite part is Linc's 'squeezing' and reminding the male part of Michael that he's a woman. That's such a real part of any man, and your mentioning of that fact (and the denying of its use) just makes this that much hotter! *guh* This is just too delicious! *omnomnom* =^;^=

[clair_de_lune]

Um. This part of Michael in this fic was an issue, indeed. On the one hand, I didn't want to draw the attention too much on it; one the other hand, I had - and wanted - to deal with it. I guess that forbidding its use was one twisted way to do this :-p I'm delighted it worked so well for you!

As for the 'squeezing'... talk about inappropriate brotherly teasing!

Thank you for taking the time to drop a note here :)

[omorka]

Not a part of this fandom, barely familiar at all with the source material, came here solely for the gender-bending and the threesome. Lovely, hot, and well-written, and for a second-person fic, that's tough. Enjoyed it!

[clair_de_lune]

Thanks so much for giving it a shot even though it's not one of your fandoms. I'm glad the gender-bending and threesome parts lured you in and you enjoyed them.
I think this was my first fic written in second-person point of view. It seemed oddly fitting and it's always nice to read that it worked :-)

Thanks again for the lovely feedback :-)