Prison Break - On the Fence

[clair_de_lune]

Title: On the Fence ( French version)
Author: clair-de-lune
Characters: Michael/Sucre, underlying Michael/Lincoln
Category: Slash
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: ~ 735
Disclaimer: Not mine. Just borrowing them for a while.
Summary: For that, Lincoln would almost thank Sucre. Or you know, punch him in the face. Lincoln hasn’t quite made up his mind about that yet.

Comments

[clair_de_lune]

The two of them were definitely up to no good in that car *g*

I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for taking the time to comment :)

[secondavisione]

You know, I'm not really into slash.

But I found this fic very beautiful, because it's all about 'guessing' and 'reading between the line'.

Your writing is truly amazing! :)

[clair_de_lune]

It's Lincoln's point of view and he so doesn't want to have a clear picture of what might have happened, I suppose it suits that the fic remains in the 'guessing' range. To be honest, my slash stories are usually more explicit than this one, though :p

I'm flattered you ventured to read it even though the genre isn't necessarily your cup of tea. Thank you for the feedback :D

[etherealflaim]

*bounces* *catches himself and sits still*

Oh, that is so very Lincoln... Almost this, not quite that, barely another... He's never fully anything until it's already too late.

Lovely, m'dear ^_^
~EF

[clair_de_lune]

Hey there! You back?

Poor Linc. Even when he does the right thing, he can't be at peace ^_^

Thanks a lot *bows*

[putu2sleep]

I like the way you wrote this. It feels like there is a war waging between Lincoln's heart and his brain. I have this feeling reading it, that Lincoln thinks he may be near the end of his ability to entice Michael, and wonders if he should "go for it," or "let it go." Either way, they both win, and they both loose.

Because for the first time, the too tight bond between Michael and Lincoln is loosening up and leaving room for someone else, making their relationship a bit more sane.
--Although I liked the whole tone of the story, and many lines stand out, this one was particularly intriguing to me.

Great story from Lincoln's perspective. He is a good guy!

[clair_de_lune]

I have this feeling reading it, that Lincoln thinks he may be near the end of his ability to entice Michael

You have a point. The mere fact that Michael is moving on is a proof, and this may be Lincoln's last opportunity to change his mind.

Either way, they both win, and they both loose

I agree with you that it's a no win / no lose situation. Either Lincoln goes for it, and they get what they want, along with an unhealthy relationship, or he lets go, which is the wise but not necessarily appealing thing to do.
... Um, I was evil with them, including Sucre who finds himself in the middle of the mess, when I wrote this ^_^

He is a good guy!

He is, and trying to do the right thing here. I've written a bunch of Michael/Lincoln fics but whevener one of them tries to hold back, it's always Lincoln. It makes sense to me - Lincoln did stupid things and ended up in jail, but the crazy plan to break him out? Michael's. If I had more inspiration, I'd like to try to reverse the dynamics just once to see out it would play out o_O

[tuesdaeschild]

If I had more inspiration, I'd like to try to reverse the dynamics just once to see out it would play out o_O

DO IT!! I'll help with the inspiration if I can! :)

[clair_de_lune]

Hm, I'll keep the offer in mind ^___^

[amodalie]

Is it me or are there a lot of MiSu fics popping up these days? Not that I'm complaining. These two have always had a magnificent chemistry.

Great story! I like the undecidedness of Lincoln's mind. He knows he should be glad for Michael but is still jealous. I'm totally with him on the fence. I'm a Michael/Lincoln girl in my heart of hearts, that's why I understand the sadness and melancholy of Linc's revelation. But then... realistically spoken there *is* more sanity in a relationship with Sucre.

There is tenderness, a dash of amusement and apologies in the way Michael gazes at him.

Aww, I love how easily they communicate. Probably Lincoln will kick Sucre's ass first, then shake his hand ;-)

[clair_de_lune]

Is it me or are there a lot of MiSu fics popping up these days?

*nods* I saw a few too. That being said, I'm afraid that, once again, it's just an old ficlet I translated :-p

To be honest, I rarely write Michael/Sucre. It doesn't work for me, I don't see it: they're too obviously buddies for me to 'slash' them. But I saw the prompt and well... ;-)

I'm a Michael/Lincoln girl too (and a Michael/Sara one but that's not the point here) but of course, there is no way to deny that it would be a twisted, to say the least, relationship. So kuddos to Lincoln for making the wise choice - even if he still feels like punching something.

Probably Lincoln will kick Sucre's ass first, then shake his hand ;-)
Works for me. Poor Linc needs a way to cool and calm down before he can move on ;-)