Prison Break - Kaleidoscope (5/9)

[clair_de_lune]

Title: Kaleidoscope (5/9)
Author: clair-de-lune
Characters: Sucre, Michael, Lincoln
Genre: Slash
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: ~ 980
Warnings: Slash
Summary: It happens during one the rare moments when the three of them, Michael, Burrows and him, are alone in the guards’ break room.

Comments

[amodalie]

Ha ha! I didn't see the kiss coming, neither of them, I didn't expect a 'pairing'... absolutely my fault. Had I read your header properly...

But the surprise was nice :)

Oh, poor Sucre, being trapped between the brother's strange and twisted kind of love!
Interesting to make Michael the more aggressive one whereas Linc kisses gently and delicately, but it's a good choice.

It was nice to be taken back to the good old Fox River times. The last paragraph really makes me wonder what would happen if the three of them were not in the restricted confines of the prison...:D

[clair_de_lune]

absolutely my fault
No, mine actually ;) The header does list slash as genre, but it doesn't give any hint about pairing(s).

Interesting to make Michael the more aggressive one whereas Linc kisses gently and delicately, but it's a good choice.
Ah, well, Sucre is probably right when he thinks that Michael and Lincoln aren't actually kissing *him*... :-p

Thanks a lot for your comment. I'm gald you enjoyed this part - and the 'surprise' ;)

[tuesdaeschild]

Ooooh!! That was such a hot little scene...I adored that Sucre would have shoved anyone else away and punched the guy in the face...and his curiosity really got the better of him!!

That Lincoln was the opposite of Michael should have been surprising but it was Michael who kissed Fernando out of anger towards his brother so maybe it wasn't such a surprise...though it was lovely that big, hunky, tough Lincoln was the gentler of the two.

So he suspects that it's hardly the first time they've joined forces like that?!! Now there's a pretty image!!

I think this one's my favourite so far...except for the Lincoln one, of course...yes, I did see the belt and handcuffs!! Just got a little carried away and forgot to mention it!! Thank you, sweetheart! :)

[clair_de_lune]

TBH, I'd initially written the 'threesome kiss', although quite differently, with Veronica instead of Sucre. (I still have to polish, translate and post it as a one shot.) But I wanted the beating thing in Vee's POV, and since the original prompter tends to like a bit of slashy OT3... ^_^

I do think that Lincoln can be gentle. I always resort to the same example, but folding origami cranes for his little brother? Denotes a certain kindness/thoughtfulness.

That Lincoln was the opposite of Michael should have been surprising but it was Michael who kissed Fernando out of anger towards his brother so maybe it wasn't such a surprise...
I guess poor Sucre is right, they aren't actually kissing him here, rather each other, and he's literally a middleman. Lincoln wouldn't be (too) harsh to Michael in this context. Either that or he's trying to piss him off, indirectly teasing him, go figure ;)

So he suspects that it's hardly the first time they've joined forces like that?!! Now there's a pretty image!!I/he didn't necessarily mean in this

[chanchito_z]

foxriverinmate was kind enough to give me a heads up on this story. I adore both M/L and M/Su so I'm also a fan of the combination of the two. I really like how you've done this from Sucre's point of view bc we get a wonderful look at the strange relationship between the brothers through his eyes. And because you did a great job of portraying Sucre's attraction to them both and the confusion he feels, it makes this little scene that much more interesting and sexy.

Um, not to be nosy, but in a comment, I noticed you mentioned a Michael/Lincoln/Veronica possibility?? I have been *begging* for that for years. And I may not have a first born to offer at your feet for it, but I'd give you a kidney or anything you'd name for that story!!

[clair_de_lune]

The Michael/Vee/Lincoln thing... *facepalm*
Right now, all I have in the Michael/Lincoln's girlfriend department is a Michael/Lisa story. I've been dragging my feet about the M/V/L fic for months. I've written the draft, but I still need to polish it, have it beta-read, translate it, and have it beta-read again in English. It may take a while. As it is now, it's really not a big deal and I'm still pondering an alternate ending. That being said, I'd be happy to let you know (and collect the promised kidney) if I ever post it ;)

I really like how you've done this from Sucre's point of view bc we get a wonderful look at the strange relationship between the brothers through his eyes.Sucre was a privileged observer in S1, wasn't he: even though Michael kept a lot of info from him, he got to see things that elude others

[chanchito_z]

Well, I find Mike/Lisa incredibly intriguing, too. So I’m happy to hear you’re working on both. I’ve not been reading much fanfic at all lately, but I’m hoping (hopehopehope) someday soon, I’ll be back into reading more. And knowing that people are writing the “odd” pairings I’ve been dying for is great to know, bc it’s something encouraging to look forward to! I also hope you continue to enjoy writing all these different PB pairs -and I’m sure there are other odd-pair fans like me who do, too

[clair_de_lune]

The Michael/Lisa story, No Aplogies, is finished, I posted it a few months ago. If you ever feel like reading it, it's probably listed on my fic index. I wondered about the kind of relationship they might had and eventually, I wrote a whole PWP just to sneak in a few paragraphs about said relationship *sighs*

I don't write so many "odd" pairings ;) Okay, I have a Michael/Nika story somewhere, but someone asked for it *g* And an ensemble of drabbles with a bunch of unusual pairings, but it was kind of a writing exercise. Really, I'm mostly a Michael/Sara and a Michael/Lincoln girl. But every now and then, dabbling in different stuff is fun and interesting.

As for the RoK fic... Knowing that the person who left a prompt read, and hopefully enjoyed, the resulting fic is nice. I won't pretend the contrary, obviously. But my enthusiasm for PB has been quite low for over a year. Writing for this fandom is harder for me than it used to be, so I'm grateful for any prompt that can help - and yours were quite attractive ;)