Prison Break - Second Language

Aug 19, 2008 21:34

Title: Second Language
Author: clair-de-lune
Characters: Lincoln, Michael, Sucre, Mahone, Bellick (Lincoln’s POV)
Spoilers: Speculations only, more or less based on a promo pic.
Genre: Gen
Rating: G
Word Count: 100 (+ 2 for the title)
Disclaimer: Not mine. Just borrowing them for a while.
Notes: Written for the Hiatus Challenge #10 "Snapshot Drabble" at pbhiatus_fic.

Second Language )

fanfic: english, fic: one shot, comm: pbhiatus_fic, fandom: prison break

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danni18 August 19 2008, 21:58:55 UTC
Liked how we got to hear other views od Michael's. I also what you said about Mahone, he seems to understand him the best

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clair_de_lune August 20 2008, 11:44:01 UTC
Aaaah, yes *sigh* I'm not a Mahone fan by a long shot, but I must admit he's the most able - well, except for Lincoln - to get how Michael's mind works ;)

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darkwriter69 August 20 2008, 01:19:23 UTC
great drabble Clair. Loved Linc's take on his brother's planning (obsessiveness) and how it affected everybody else.

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clair_de_lune August 20 2008, 11:52:53 UTC
I'll have to thank a couple of promo pics for the plot bunny - although Lincoln isn't smirking in them.
I'm glad you liked it :D

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wrldpossibility August 20 2008, 03:24:56 UTC
Oh, I love this! I really like that it's from Linc's POV. Who knows Michael better? And I love the implication that Mahone quickly catches on and joins the obsession, whereas everyone else is a little lost. *g*

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clair_de_lune August 20 2008, 11:45:03 UTC
Who knows Michael better?

Exactly. And he probably enjoys watching the others trying to catch up, having been here himself *g*
I can't say that I like Mahone, but even I have to acknwoledge that if someone can follow and understand where Michael's going, it's him.

Thanks a lot :)

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clair_de_lune August 20 2008, 12:01:59 UTC
And why shouldn't he?!

Indeed. I hope that by now, Lincoln has understood that he can trust Michael's crazy plans.

And I like that last bit abot Mahone who "gets "on board immediately"

I'm glad you do. Those were hard words to write for someone who, like me, doesn't appreciate Mahone :p

I don't know how you are about spoilers

Shhhh!!! *g*
I've seen promo pics, read a few spoilers, but I try to avoid the detailed ones. In other words, in theory I'm a spoilerophobe, and in the facts I'm weak ;)

Thank you for reading and commenting :)

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anonymous August 20 2008, 09:47:53 UTC
as always, beautiful, even if it is short. Cannot wait till september, hopefully authors like you will get plenty of inspiration then when the guys return on t.v. (not that there has been any lack of inspiration on your part), both fiction and the series are great!

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clair_de_lune August 20 2008, 11:47:50 UTC
Hehe, I'm afraid 'short' was part of the deal challenge :-p
Thank you for the kind comment :)

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