Prison Break - Breathe

Aug 17, 2008 18:21

Title: Breathe
Author: clair-de-lune
Characters: LJ, Sara
Spoilers: Speculations only
Genre: Gen
Rating: G
Word Count: 100 (+ 1 for the title)
Disclaimer: Not mine. Just borrowing them for a while.
Summary: I’m not going to summarize a 100 words drabble! ;)
Notes: Written for the Hiatus Challenge #10: Snapshot Drabble at pbhiatus_fic.

Breathe )

fanfic: english, fic: one shot, comm: pbhiatus_fic, fandom: prison break

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lauratnz August 17 2008, 16:37:04 UTC
Oh, wonderful! I'm really looking forward to some interaction between LJ and Sara in S4 and your version of it was just beautiful.

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clair_de_lune August 18 2008, 08:52:52 UTC
I'm not an LJ fan, but I really hope the writers will at least give us a scene... something about Sara and LJ.
Thanks so much for your comment. I'm glad you liked this :)

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torigates August 17 2008, 16:58:50 UTC
This is so lovely.

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clair_de_lune August 18 2008, 08:53:06 UTC
Thank you :D

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chatty_cat August 18 2008, 15:10:26 UTC
This is beautiful! I loved it. *g*

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clair_de_lune August 18 2008, 17:28:46 UTC
Thanks a lot :)

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lizparker6 August 18 2008, 20:22:03 UTC
Loved it.
Drabbles are so often underestimated, ppl think its easy to write something "short and sweet", but to write a really good drablle, to express some deep thought and press some really good writing into 100 words, THATS the real challenge. Thats the most difficult thing and youve mastered it perfectly.:)
You girls here are all so talented, its always such a joy to read all your submissions and fics and ideas. I lvoe this place so much because its literally buzzing with enthusiasm, talent and bright ideas, as well as open-minded friendship.
Lol, sorry to babble away, I just wanted to let you know I really appreciated your work.

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clair_de_lune August 19 2008, 18:10:12 UTC
I'd never written a drabble in English before because I dreaded the word count thing *g* but weirdly, it's been easier than when I try in my own language. Go figure. Stroke of luck, I guess :p I'm glad the drabble worked for you.

pbhiatus_fic is a nice comm, isn't it? The mods always have great challenge ideas.

Thanks so muc for your comment :)

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clair_de_lune August 19 2008, 18:10:56 UTC
I really don't know either. I've been weak and read a few spoilers, but not that much :p But I'm with you on that, Sara and LJ actually sharing a bit of screen time would be nice.
Thanks for commenting :)

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