Prison Break - Well-Advised

Jul 21, 2008 12:55

Title: Well-Advised
Author: clair-de-lune
Characters: T-Bag, Michael
Genre: Gen
Word Count: ~ 570
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: Not mine. Just borrowing them for a while.
Summary: One of the few pieces of good advice his father ever gave Theodore was to be careful of what he wished for, because he just might get it.
Notes: Set during episode 2.22. Thanks to torigates for ( Read more... )

fanfic: english, fic: one shot, fandom: prison break

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cybeleadam July 21 2008, 12:02:12 UTC
to be careful of what he wished for, because he just might get it
Eh, je le dis aussi, ça ! lol Depuis le jour où je l'ai lu je ne sais plus où, je trouve que c'est souvent approprié.

Peut-être qu'il serait utile que tu m'expliques un peu ce qui se passe dans l'épisode auquel tu fais référence, par contre. ^^;

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clair_de_lune July 21 2008, 18:52:39 UTC
Ce qu'il se passe... Comme tu as dû le comprendre, T-Bag n'est pas une personne spécialement recommandable. Dans la scène en question, Michael et lui se battent pour un sac rempli de billets. Michael finit par avoir le dessus (littéralement et métaphoriquement) et T-Bag lui dit qu'il n'aura pas le cran de le tuer. Et effectivement, il ne le tue pas : il se contente de lui planter un couteau dans l'avant-bras, ce qui est particulièrement méchant sachant qu'à la fin de la saison précédente, quelqu'un a coupé la main - celle de l'autre bras - à T-Bag. Bref, il se retrouve cloué au sol, avec la police pas bien loin ^_^

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cybeleadam July 22 2008, 01:04:01 UTC
Merci pour les explications.
Bon, il ne faut vraiment pas que je regarde cette série, moi ! Des trucs pareils, j'en ferais des cauchemars ! (Les couteaux, c'est une de mes phobies.)

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clair_de_lune July 22 2008, 18:09:25 UTC
C'est une série parfois un peu brutale, va-t-on dire ;) Et T-Bag *icone* arrange rarement les choses.

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pamalax July 21 2008, 12:57:16 UTC
Very very nice! Not enough T Bag fic ever so this one is fabulous treat.

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clair_de_lune July 21 2008, 18:55:45 UTC
Thank you :)
I haven't written a lot of them and I usually keep them short - who would want to linger on Teddy's mind? ^^- but once in a while, it's fun interesting to try.

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alienmom July 21 2008, 18:19:07 UTC
completely brilliant!! you really got T-bag's "voice" perfectly.

i loved the entire cabin scene between the two. you fleshed out that flashback from his childhood home very well (eventhough it creeped me out '->)

psst...there is a tiny typo in the second to last paragraph. by-scout instead of boy-scout.

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clair_de_lune July 21 2008, 19:01:17 UTC
Both scenes, the childhood flashback and the cabin scene in 2.22, were creepy to begin with, weren't they?
Actually, I wrote the original version of this fic when I was writing a rather happy story, The Time They Need. I needed something different to change my mind: T-Bag was just perfect for that. You can always trust him with the creepy.

Thanks a lot for the great feedback :) I'm glad you liked the story.

And thanks for the typo - fixed ;)

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the_last_shadow July 22 2008, 11:37:58 UTC
Lovely! It's been long since someone cared to write something about them. Thank you for writting it. It was short, intense and kind of sweet...awesome. Please write more! :D

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clair_de_lune July 24 2008, 16:53:26 UTC
Thanks a lot for your kind words. I'm glad you enjoyed the fic :)

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msgenevieve July 27 2008, 07:42:55 UTC
Gah.

You know, I'm still seriously considering learning French so I can read your writing in its original form. Meep.

As usual, I am in awe at the range of your writing. Every character in your stories is perfectly *in* character, whether it's Gretchen or Sofia or Sara or Michael or T-Bag, each voice distant and very much their own.

I'm off to read that Jane/Sara now. *glees*

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clair_de_lune July 28 2008, 13:20:40 UTC
You know, I'm still seriously considering learning French so I can read your writing in its original form. Meep.
lol, thank you ;)

I've always tended to focus (a lot) on Michael, Lincon and Sara, but I used to write a rather wide range of characters and I miss that. I still hope it'll get better when the fourth season starts ^^

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