Prison Break - That Woman

[clair_de_lune]

Title: That Woman
Author: clair-de-lune
Character: Sara
Genre: Gen
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: Not mine. Just borrowing them for a while.
Summary: She won’t be that woman.
Notes: Thanks to recycledfaery for her help with the translation. ( French version)

Comments

[lauratnz]

Wow! That last bit made me gasp out loud! Seriously, even knowing what happens in the story, seeing it described in such a way gave it great depth for me: "she sucks in just a bit more than she should to stay on the safe side of the line"

I really enjoyed this story as a whole, I like the way you got in Sara's head and showed us what this time period looked like trough her eyes.

This line particularly got to me... that she would be thinking this too at that moment, it makes so much sense and feels so real:
musing that her father would be punished twice: escapee, Lincoln Burrows, accomplice, the Governor’s daughter

Awesome *winks*

[clair_de_lune]

I'm really glad you liked this ficlet. I translated recently but it was the first PB fic I wrote in French almost two years ago and because of that, it's still kind of my pet :-p

that she would be thinking this too at that moment, it makes so much sense and feels so real
It's been a while since I rewatched the season one finale but as far as I remember, she was quite pissed off at her father because he hadn't reviewed Lincoln's file as she'd asked him to. So I guess that, yes, she wouldn't think only about Michael's... I don't know, ploy, treason, request?

Thank you for the kind feedback!

And thanks for the heads-up on the typo, before - I fixed it ;)

[secondavisione]

This is just perfect. You are an amazing writer!

[clair_de_lune]

Oh, thanks so much! This is an old fic, actually the first PB fic I wrote a few years ago, and I'm thrilled you enjoyed it and took the time to drop a note.

[secondavisione]

My pleasure, really.

I *love* your style and actually can't stop reading your fics - as you may have noticed ;)