Prison Break - They Dance

[clair_de_lune]

Title: They Dance
Author: clair-de-lune
Characters, pairings: Michael/Lincoln, mention of Lincoln/OFC, cameo by Veronica and Derek
Genre: Slash
Warning: Incest
Rating: R
Word count: ~ 3780
Disclaimer: Not mine. Just borrowing them for a while.
Summary: It’s a joke or a trick or a misunderstanding. A twisted bond, a fucked up display of mutual trust, a weird

Comments

[switchblade_kid]

Wonderful. x

[clair_de_lune]

Thank you! :)

[callmetofu]

Thank you so much for picking my prompt. I really loved it. You did an amazing job. Much better than I could ever hope for. So many smaller stories and hot and seductive. I love the dynamic they have

[clair_de_lune]

I kind of took the easy road: I had in mind several situations and rather than picking one and developing it, I just didn't choose at all. Hence the succession of small moments and the escalation. That being said, it's a good thing if it works :-)

I love how Michael says “To whoever you want” because I have the feeling that Lincoln will have to keep pretending for a long time, pretending in front of himself.
Lincoln is to blame insofar as he started it - not to mention the stunt with the girl. I'm not sure I succeeded but I tried to share the responsibilities between them. I know I tend to write a quite manipulative Michael, even when it's in an "innocent" way, and a more clueless Lincoln. I wanted to try and write a different angle for this story.

I love how they dance and Lincoln lets Michael lead because Michael is too much of a control freak.
The end of Watershed made me smile because of this - I swear I wrote that before I read your story ^_^

I'm really glad that you liked it. Thanks so much for commenting :-)

[callmetofu]

I have the same problem all the time. So many story ideas, no idea where to put them and then I end up throwing all moments and all sex scenes into the same story.

When I read your dance scene I immediately thought back to mine and tried to remember how I wrote mine. Whether I came to the same conclusion. Of course in my story Michael was the only one who knew how to dance so it was obvious that he woud be leading!

Thank you so much for writing!

[learnthemusic]

So, so amazing. I enjoyed this very much. I really like their 'pretending'. This was just too great.

[clair_de_lune]

Thanks a lot for reading and commenting. I'm glad that you liked it :)

[anisapologist]

This is very realistic. I always struggle with exactly HOW a sexual relationship could start between these two brothers, and this is about as real as it gets...pretending that leads to wondering that leads to yearning that leads to....very well done. And HOT AS. I thought I was going to spontanously combust during the alley scene at the end! Thanks for this!

[clair_de_lune]

Down the slippery slope because of a dumb joke... They can thank blame Derek ^_^
Thanks a lot for commenting :)

[freaky_nea]

I'm in awe of the in-character-ness that is in each of your fics! Thanks for writing *hugs*

[clair_de_lune]

Oh, thank you! I'm never sure about my characterizations, so your comment pleases me to no end :)