Man, I really love these. Particularly how naughty the ones for Double-Edged Sword are. Very saucy!
The --th time, it’s because Lincoln deserves it because of the fourth time. He’s so drunk that he won’t remember any of it anyway. Michael feels bad about it. Really he does. About three seconds tops before he kisses him and two days after he did.
Michael pretends that nothing happened and he thinks that Lincoln has no need to pretend: he really doesn’t remember.
Really love this one because it's so simple, dark and lovely at the same time. But I agree, it wouldn't have fit in the progression of the scenes. But it's still lovely to think about on its own.
But I agree, it wouldn't have fit in the progression of the scenes. Exactly. I also wanted to share the responsibilities between the both of them here, so I had at least two reasons to drop this one. Of course now, I feel like writing it anyway and making a separate drabble out of it :-p
I shortened Double-Edged Sword. Initially, things didn't go that far when Lincoln visits Michael (hence the "Let me do it") and I had planned for a third scene, but it was too repetitive and just dragging on. I cut off or didn't develop a bit of dialogs for the same reason.
I think it's also because in They Dance they sort of dance around the real kissing and so it seems very fitting that Michael is quite surprised when it happens. It's quite a lovely effect.
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The --th time, it’s because Lincoln deserves it because of the fourth time. He’s so drunk that he won’t remember any of it anyway. Michael feels bad about it. Really he does. About three seconds tops before he kisses him and two days after he did.
Michael pretends that nothing happened and he thinks that Lincoln has no need to pretend: he really doesn’t remember.
Really love this one because it's so simple, dark and lovely at the same time. But I agree, it wouldn't have fit in the progression of the scenes. But it's still lovely to think about on its own.
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But I agree, it wouldn't have fit in the progression of the scenes.
Exactly. I also wanted to share the responsibilities between the both of them here, so I had at least two reasons to drop this one.
Of course now, I feel like writing it anyway and making a separate drabble out of it :-p
I shortened Double-Edged Sword. Initially, things didn't go that far when Lincoln visits Michael (hence the "Let me do it") and I had planned for a third scene, but it was too repetitive and just dragging on. I cut off or didn't develop a bit of dialogs for the same reason.
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