Comments | cjmarlowe: FIC: Only Forward (AI RPF, Kris/Katy, Kris/Adam, NC-17, 2/2)

cjmarlowe

FIC: Only Forward (AI RPF, Kris/Katy, Kris/Adam, NC-17, 2/2)

Oct 26, 2009 18:46

Part One | Master Post

( It would take some work to get their voices to blend just right - the one big roadblock that had always existed, though they were closer than they used to be - but the energy, the resonance, the emotion, already they had that down. They had that down without even trying. )

fic: only forward, american idol fic, fic, adam/kris, rating: adult, kris/katy

Comments 102

poppetawoppet October 27 2009, 01:02:11 UTC

oh my god this was all kinds of perfect. Just... words escape me. The characterization, the way you used what happened in the past to justify what was happening now... sighs.

cjmarlowe October 27 2009, 08:13:21 UTC

Thank you so much!

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cjmarlowe October 27 2009, 08:13:47 UTC

Thank you!

yekoc October 27 2009, 01:11:19 UTC

I'm just kind of floored by this fic. There were so many things I loved, starting with your Katy -- I think it's the first time a fic has really made me love Katy, not just like her or accept her, and that was so wonderful and important because it was the only way the rest of it could have worked.

And the rest of it did work, so, so well. I loved the slow realization on all of their parts that Kris's feeling for Adam were not only real but also permanent, and that Katy's the one who figures out that that can be a good thing, if they let it.

I love that Kris's love for both of them is so strong it's almost tangible, and that they love him back enough to let that be okay.

And lastly, on the subject of tangibility, this line:

"I'm so in love with you it hurts," Kris whispered, and Adam made a sound like a sob into his shoulder.

It's one of those lines where I actually felt something clench inside me.

Gorgeous.

lucy_u2 October 27 2009, 02:08:07 UTC

It's one of those lines where I actually felt something clench inside me.

That's pretty much what I was going to say here. That line killed me.

cjmarlowe October 27 2009, 09:03:49 UTC

Thank you! :)

cjmarlowe October 27 2009, 09:00:26 UTC

Wow, this is such an amazing comment. Thank you! Kris being absolutely in love with both of them was a huge, huge part of this story, so I'm so glad that it came through as well as it did. The choices they had to make weren't easy, so they needed to be worth it. :)

danse_amore October 27 2009, 01:22:50 UTC

Oh. Oh. Oh, my OT3. I love this so much, you don't even...

This is so amazing, so gorgeous, so...PERFECT. Thank you so much for writing this.

cjmarlowe October 27 2009, 09:01:06 UTC

Thank you very much!! :D

glambertsgirl October 27 2009, 01:55:45 UTC

I loved the plot in this one. It was just perfect with all three of them. I love the fact that Katy was so open to their relationship. Great job!

cjmarlowe October 27 2009, 09:03:16 UTC

Thanks so much! :D