o8. Make a Deal with the City 2/2

[cityverse]

Title: Make a Deal with the City 2/2
Character(s): Kangin, Leeteuk
Rating: PG13
Word Count: 4700
Summary: Eighth installment, part two of two (see previous here). The hunters are finally getting somewhere with their mission, but it might be one step forward, two steps back.
References: Story Archive
Notes: Special thanks to meitachi for the short-notice

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[cityverse]

...LOL, spot saved for Mei at her request.

[meiface]

♥♥♥

Back after a 7 hour drive! Will return!

[lluvia_yuki]

SPOT!

[lluvia_yuki]

Oh my. Finally an update! ^o^ It's been such a long time, I've actually been sulking over the lack of updates. xD But.. yeah. Take your time, because it's all worth it in the end. 8D

[cityverse]

Ahahahaaa... I will try!

It's good to hear that he's better this time around. God knows I've been working on it a whole lot. XD;

Ehehe, I've only seen the second season and a few episodes from the first and third. And the movie. But Sy has been a big fan for years.

Donghaaaeee. ♥ I just hope he's not coming off as...gimmicky, like, "LOL, Hae's being weird yet again." ...Although I guess that's pretty much the sum of it right now. Sigh. So much more to do with everybody~

:D; There will indeed be Kyu, and his perspective will be...handy, for certain things. :x

[fireatwill]

YES! I've been longing for an update!! And I'm not dissapointed ^.^

"Are we talking 'aaah, there are alligators in the sewers after all!' or 'I've got a corpse on my hands, what do I do with it?' kind of important?"

Donghae is the cutest thing ever, along with Eeteuk and Sungmin being Buffy fangirls.
I love that Kangin has a bad-ass-o-meter, and that Kangteuk share a bed. that's just precious

[cityverse]

I'm sorry it took so long! Glad it was worth it. :D;

Hae on the phone is my favorite part, hands-down. XD Nothing is ever boring with him involved.

[dear_whimsy]

SPOT OHEMGEE

[dear_whimsy]

Augh, I am back after having been unceremoniously pulled away for previous engagements. @___@

And afjeisfljsiejflseik YAY THE LONG-AWAITED UPDATE.

(except for that one time when he uploaded an old photo of himself out cold on the floor, perfectly outlined by empty beer bottles like a murder scene, the caption proudly reading, "Fuckin' A").

Oh, how I love your Kangin. So brash and manly~~~ I don't even go for manly, what. The entire first section was so comfortable to read; your Eeteuk and Kangin really mesh so well together without even being together why is this *SOB*, and it's really reminding me of one of those old films featuring those partners in crime/justice - late nights, coffee, stubble and computers. XD Sorry, I'm not feeling very up to par today, so this will be a gross comment. D:

but Leeteuk had thought differently and gone to university (only to drop out after two years).

;_; I'm really lame, but this made me really sad, maybe because I have such a "SECONDARY EDUCATION IS A MUST" complex.

He closes his eyes and

[cityverse]

The Kangin brand of manly is super hot. XD As for higher education... Eh, being hunters doesn't exactly pay well, and keeps them pretty busy. Most of them don't bother, but since Leeteuk wasn't raised into that lifestyle, he tries to balance hunting with...normal life. Which goes kind of badly. :\

XD Ahaha, yay, I'm glad you pointed out Hae's other line from the phone conversation. The alligators one was cool and all, but I like that one because you know Kibum's there like, "*facepalm* Where's your phone etiquette? Never mind, give me that."

:D; The meeting scene required a lot of work to get it to transition and balance right. With these guys, it's always tempting to let them have fun and be cute and aww, making friends. I have to keep the hunters vs. vampires mindset though. Less comfort, more unease. Grah, I think that was one of the main issues with rewriting and editing.

[jaded_skys]

shfakjsdhfashk spot~

[jaded_skys]

FLAIL.

"Field trip?"
"If you promise me you'll behave."

♥ They are so much love. Also, I found that this chapter's Eeteuk was much more... in character, I guess would be the proper way to say it, than last chapter. He seemed like he was on a "good day" while still being broken!Teuk. It's a delicate balance, but it was perfect in this chapter, I just wanted to mention ♥ ... also, all I see in the majority of interactions is sweet, sweet Kangteuk and this makes me happy. Oh oh so happy.

This is utterly utterly fabulous, ok. I love that they're Buffy fangirls. I love that Kangin is an idiot who doesn't know when to shut up. I love that Sungmin is a total cheery bitch and the Kibum is the "responsible one" and that Donghae is just flat out adorable and such a kitten. Love love love.

Plz to not leaving us a horrible, lonely month without you again?? ♥♥♥♥

[cityverse]

Good to hear that Leeteuk's a little more balanced~ I might be getting the hang of him now. Maybe. XD Thanks for keeping track of that!

Haha, I'd never even seen Buffy until Sy made me sit down to watch and enjoy the second season (and a bit of the third). Sungmin probably has the entire series.

We've been joking about that meeting scene and Kibum being responsible since forever. He's so put-upon, being the 'adult' of the household when Shiwon's away even though he's the youngest. XD

Donghae is my favorite part of the installment. The end. ♥

I'll try~ XD;

[jaded_skys]

As always, you are fantastic~ You just keep going from omg crazy good to OMG! CRAZY GOOD to WHAT THE HELL, HOW DOES THIS KEEP GETTING BETTER AND BETTER?! ♥

I was hardcore into the first few seasons when they aired, but the latter stuff, not a clue. I could see him proudly displaying the boxsets in the living room, to be honest. XD

Poor poor Kibum, always the adult when he's not fucking Siwon, y/y? and oh wow, I fail, it took second read to realize the whole Kangmin kerfuffle was Kangin taking about Kyu! D:! THIS IS WHY I RE-READ THINGS. BECAUSE AHSJDFHJKSDHGJGHDKHASJDHF~~~ And oh, oh Kyu... I'm all worried at how things are gonna go down. Worried and WILDLY EXCITED!