o5. Mélange

[cityverse]

Title: Mélange
Character(s): Sungmin, Kyuhyun, Kibum, Shiwon, Leeteuk, Kangin, Donghae
Rating: PG13-NC17 range (yes, we have smut)
Word Count: 6000
Summary: So when I said I wanted to write a Christmas story for retarded vampire antics, what I meant was a November-December collection of short stories for porn and angst and I don't even know what.

Comments

[meiface]

MF SPOT.

[sugarless_666]

NOT. FAIR. D:

[meiface]

Heheheh. >D I have unfair advantages and I'm shameless enough to use them!

[sugarless_666]

adjskjdksa ;~; *intimidated*

*fixes html*

[meiface]

YOU. YOU. ALSKFJLD. YOU TWO. (THREE, EVEN. Four?)

I just--wow. I am a whole jumble of emotion here and totally incoherent. Also in a bit of a rush, so once again you'll get better feedback from me later. First impression though?

WHY MUST YOUR TEUKIE BREAK ME? WHY MUST I LOVE HIM SO MUCH? And, damn, him & Kangin in a motel room staring at the TV with the laptop open is pinging so much Supernatural vibes for me. Pretty awesome because in the end, the KangTeuk still has a way different feeling and dynamic than Sam & Dean.

Also: laksjfldkjflsat forgetangel. I love you. I love this 'verse. I'm so happy it's so epic. I will one day convince you to write me proper Kangteuk. >D

[cityverse]

XD Good, good, as much as we enjoy referencing SPN and springboarding off of it, KangTeuk are their own characters with their own story.

I love Kyuhyun so much lately, I don't even know why (except for The Voice, because it is Fantastic and Superb and SING MORE, KYU). Ahahaha. *die* I was perfectly fine while writing the porn, but now I can't look at it anymore. Editing went something like "OKAY, NO EMBARRASSING TYPOS, RIGHT? RIGHT? GOOD. WE'RE DONE."

akljsdgfksgjsagk I just. Hae. I can't plan with him, he just happens. I can't sit down with him and figure out his thoughts or responses to things, and this Bothers me. ... ... ...But! Well, when I was still making ;____; faces over Denial of KiHae, I went, "...We should just give him a girlfriend then and he'll have the only normal relationship out of the entire cast." And so it went. XD; But man, I still feel like someone out there will want to lynch us (and it's hilarious).

[meiface]

UGH PLEASE, USE YOUR TEUK ICON AT ME MOAR.

Write me porn. Write me KiHae. Write me KangTeuk! Ooooh there is so much to demand from you now! >D No, seriously though. How go your other writing projects? I know Cityverse is the big priority, but I'd love to see other pieces from you. ♥ I feel retarded with all my one-shots. Stupid lengthy fics give me the hives, I swear to God. ::glares at the two still on her HD::

[cityverse]

XD *obliges*

Uh, you're not going to be happy to hear this (why do I keep disappointing you, Mei? ;___;), but I am so displeased with my movie!verse KiHae, I don't think I can finish it. orz I can try writing KiHae porn sometime to make up for it? YOU SHOULD WRITE MORE.

[meiface]

kasjdflkslj you break my heart over and over and over. ;____; Really, though, I understand what it's like to be totally frustrated and displeased with something you've written--I have so much stuff on my harddrive that I never want to look at again because I have no idea how to finish. How much did you have of your movie!verse fic? Regardless, all is okay. I'm happy following your Cityverse even if you deny me all the good parts and all the future parts, bah! BUT I WOULD NEVER TURN DOWN KIHAE PORN. JUST SAYIN'. ♥♥

I still need to leave you real feedback, hmm. I'll get to that eventually. There will be Actual Thoughts then, heh. ::procrastinates::

[cityverse]

It's been at a halt at 2300 words for weeks (months?) now. D: There are some parts that are all right, but the whole thing is cluttered and disorganized (I don't know wtf I was thinking, writing it like that). I don't know, maybe I can take a few of the good scenes and make something new. @_@