Comments | citrinesunset: Fic: "Routine," complete. Torchwood, Jack/Ianto, R

citrinesunset

Fic: "Routine," complete. Torchwood, Jack/Ianto, R

Jun 11, 2010 20:46

Title: Routine
Author: citrinesunset
Fandom: Torchwood
Characters/Pairing: Jack/Ianto
Rating: R
Word count: 1800
Contains: Shaving, D/s, light sex and discipline spanking.
Summary: Ianto is a slave to Jack's whims.

Notes: I wrote this to fulfill the "Shaving/depilation" square on my kink_bingo card. Finally got a chance to finish editing it, now ( Read more... )

kink, fic, kink_bingo, torchwood, jack/ianto

Comments 14

51stcenturyfox June 12 2010, 02:19:20 UTC

OMG, now I have a new kink. *shakes fist*

I really like that they tired of this; very realistic.

(We can put a man on the moon, yet there are no permanent and painless depilatories. WAI!?)

citrinesunset June 12 2010, 03:23:26 UTC

Thanks! New kinks are fun!

Hair removal: great fun for writing, not so easy in real life.

cruentum June 12 2010, 12:22:18 UTC

Oh I love that they get bored of it, and it doesn't remain this sexy secret awesome thing that they do but that it turns to routine and 'oh meh'. Enjoyed this.

citrinesunset June 12 2010, 22:48:34 UTC

Thanks!

I'm a sucker for routine and domestic kink.

lefaym June 13 2010, 07:32:35 UTC

"It'll itch," Ianto says. "When it grows back."

Thank you for including this. It always really throws me out when people don't acknowledge how itchy the regrowth is! :P

Like the others, I also like that you wrote them as getting tired of it eventually.

I wonder, do you envision Jack and Ianto moving back and forth between who doms and who subs, or do you envision them as always having the dynamic you write above? I just ask because if you do envision them switching, I'd love to see what sort of little rituals Ianto devises for Jack with that innovative mind of his. :)

citrinesunset June 14 2010, 01:29:29 UTC

Thanks!

Heh, I can't imagine not acknowledging the itching. :P

Good question! I could totally Jack and Ianto switching. If I had to decide what I thought the most realistic dynamic would be, that would be it. I seem to really favor writing Dom!Jack and sub!Ianto, though. I guess kink isn't always logical. Dom!Ianto is really tempting to write, though. I'd see him as being quite devious.

nancybrown June 13 2010, 16:45:49 UTC

This was a really good take on the concept. I loved the realistic little details, and the progression. Nice job!

citrinesunset June 14 2010, 01:29:48 UTC

Thanks!

owensheart June 13 2010, 17:17:54 UTC

Well thats definitely a new kink to me. Loveld fic though and I love that ists something they do together.

Great writing.

citrinesunset June 14 2010, 01:30:05 UTC

Thank you!