"you took my breath but I survived"
Anyone up to looking around a fic? I already have a fabulous beta in carolinecrane so it isn't for actual grammar and spelling or anything but I would like a second set of eyes to just give me some notes.
It's about 16k and the Neil/Kent. Knowledge of fall league baseball would be a plus. Brutal honesty is nice as well. (To be fair I am a lame one and might take things hard but usually my best writing comes after my feelings are hurt a bit.)
Either way, HELP?
It's about 16k and the Neil/Kent. Knowledge of fall league baseball would be a plus. Brutal honesty is nice as well. (To be fair I am a lame one and might take things hard but usually my best writing comes after my feelings are hurt a bit.)
Either way, HELP?