Comments | cindergal: The Open Halls of the Soul, chapter 2

cindergal

The Open Halls of the Soul, chapter 2

Apr 04, 2007 12:58

TITLE: The Open Halls of the Soul ( Read more... )

pairing: spike/buffy, fic: btvs, fic: the open halls of the soul, fic, series

Comments 22

makd April 4 2007, 20:46:20 UTC

getting my bearings on the timeline. Interesting.

little niggle: Accept this time, he was alone. Damned spell-checks never pick out the "accept/except" homonyms! :-(

cindergal April 4 2007, 21:12:43 UTC

Oh, and did you read the prologue? It should help with the timeline. If you didn't, it's here: http://cindermom.livejournal.com/192416.html

cindergal April 4 2007, 21:13:47 UTC

Thanks!

_jems_ April 4 2007, 21:12:15 UTC

I'm insanely curious about what Spike's quest will turn out to be. I can't think of anything he'd need to do that badly if everyone is already dead. Great chapter!

cindergal April 5 2007, 00:02:35 UTC

Thanks! Glad you liked it. :-)

spicklething April 4 2007, 21:21:50 UTC

Don't apologize!

I LOVE the tone of this rewrite!

I'll get on the beta tonight when I get home from work. Once I get the urchins settled and tidy up the guest room (the 'rents are coming this weekend to give me an ulcer visit) I'll get out the comb and take the fine tooth to it!

cindergal April 5 2007, 00:03:54 UTC

Thanks! I'm really glad you like it. I was a lot happier with the additions.

frenchani April 4 2007, 21:47:26 UTC

Ohhhh...

I know, not very eloquent but I can't wrap my mind aorund the idea that they would be all dead.

cindergal April 5 2007, 00:04:38 UTC

I don't think Spike can wrap his head around it either. Thanks for reading!

effulgent_girl April 4 2007, 22:44:56 UTC

They can't all be dead, can they? -whimpers- I don't know what he's planning on doing but I'm sure it will be good.

cindergal April 5 2007, 00:06:02 UTC

I'll have to take the fifth on your question, but thank you so much for reading. :-)