Borderline [Chapter 1]

[cimbeline]

Title: Borderline
Summary: There's a borderline to everything. To what is wrong and to what is right, but for the two of them, this wrong was a right. 
Rating: PG-15/NC-17 (to be safe) 
Genre: Angst/Romance
Pairing(s): OnKey (Mentioned! 2min)

Comments

[caffelattae]

Oh goodness. I love this fic! It's been so long since I've read something that gave me the actual chills from reading! (Redundant, meh). But yes, I'm waiting for the next chapter!

I love the development, so far. Although one thing that irks me is that Onew's married (and it's just me, probably) but I just dislike the idea of loving someone married, and if this was to be a happy ending (of which I hope it is, but idk about you of course), Key'll have to have Jinki separated from his wife and I don't know, it's not morals or values but. Meh. I'm looking too much into that part, so sorry!

But I also love the whole SHINee member introduction! :-) Obvsly, Taemin has to be Minho's boyfriend, hahaha!

Thank you for sharing! :-) Good luck to the following chapters

[cimbeline]

Thank you so much for reading! :) I'm glad that you liked it! ^^ Haha yes, the idea of Onew being married isn't everyone's cup of tea but I promise I'll try my hardest to make it awesome! XD

Yes, Taemin has to be Minho's boyfriend.

:))

[sunday_lee]

I like your story a lot, it's long time since I read an OnKey chaptered fic with this great storyline

I'm a little bit bother with the fact that Jinki got married already, and the girl is Luna, a good girl (I'm tired of bitchy Luna, Jessica... in SHINee fanfic). Even when Jinki doesn't love her and it's only an arranged marriage, what he is doing is called cheating, and I really hate cheating T_T Besides, Kibum stil doesn't know Jinki was married right?

Jinki said he wanted to protect Kibum, did Jinki's parent threaten to destroy Kibum's life or what?

And I'm curious (yeah) about how their love developed in the past, Jjong was Kibum's boyfriend and Jinki's childhood friend so it's like Jjong lose his boyfriend to his childhood friend ^^ sounds interesting haha

Thank you for your writing
Can't wait for the next chapters

p/s about Forevermore, this weekend finally I'll have time to translate it, I'll do my best ^^ I really like "Forevermore" *sob*

[cimbeline]

Thank you! Haha, I'm tired of seeing bitchy Luna too. lol. Haha you just have to wait for the couple chapters to see. XD Haha. :) I wanted this to be something like real life. I was going to make this a fluff kind of story but fluffy stories doesn't suit well with me.

Oh, don't worry about "Forevermore", take your time. I'm really honored that you actually wanted to translate my story! Gambatte! Hwaiting!

*hugs*

[saionji90]

omg omg omg i love ur story so so so much! 1st paragraph on ur fic was interesting, that made me wanna read more... ur describe about key's pain, really good! i can feel that until now :( n the fact that jinki was married n key doesn't know that made me broke into pieces ;____; whats key reaction if he found out about that? i cant imagine that :'(((( omg i dont know what iam saying, i just want u to continue this story soon, pleaseeee~~~ i cant wait any longer huks. thank you so much for write this =DD <3

[sky_fish7]

Wow I really liked this. The story is really interesting... such meetings after a few years bear a lot of interesting stuff from the past. I'm curious how this will continue and I hope there will be a happy end for Onkey =( Even if Onew's wife is to pity and I don't like cheeting at all... I can understand it because he never had other feelings for her (but... does she know that?) Ah maybe I'm thinking to much right now. I should wait and see.

[cimbeline]

@sky_fish7

Thank you for liking my story! Haha, I'll try to update as soon as I caan. I'm planning a lot for this story. XD Thanks for the comment! ^o^b

[cimbeline]

Haha thank you for liking my story. :) I really appreciate you dropping a comment! ^o^ Don't worry I'll try to update as soon as I can! :D