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Broken Trust (merentha13)

Oct 02, 2011 19:09

Title: Broken Trust
Author: merentha13
Artist: bodiecuddle
Archive to Pros Lib: Yes
Genre: Slash
Characters/Pairing: Bodie/Doyle
Word count: 25,500
Warnings: None

Summary: Doyle has betrayed CI5 and Bodie… or has he? Will Bodie set aside his hurt and anger, to find his missing partner.

Notes: I bothered many people in the writing of this story. I want to thank ( Read more... )

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Comments 71

liriel1810 October 3 2011, 00:45:41 UTC

The month has only just started and I'm already behind in reading! ack!

Thank you so much for all your efforts. I do love some Doyle whumpage so I'm really looking forward to reading this! I'll be back to comment again when I have read (but that might take a while - sorry). Cheers!

merentha13 October 3 2011, 12:02:03 UTC

Thanks! This being my first attempt at a long story, I'd appreciate any and all comments about what worked for you and what didn't! I hope you enjoy it.

sc_fossil October 3 2011, 01:24:32 UTC

Looks good. Congratulations on a succesful posting.

merentha13 October 3 2011, 12:03:29 UTC

Getting all the formatting and links to work was almost harder than writing the story!!! There is a reason some people were not meant to interact with computers! *g* I'm glad its posted, finally.*heavy sigh....)

firlefanzine October 3 2011, 03:43:12 UTC

*blushes*
It was honour and joy to watch the story grow! Thank you for the opportunity.
It's very heatbreaking and dramatic and I can highly recommend it! :-)
And the video shows perfectly the hard times they have to go through.

merentha13 October 3 2011, 12:04:14 UTC

Thank you again, for everything!

bodiecuddle October 3 2011, 14:56:54 UTC

Thank you!!!

For me it was really honour to work for herand doing a vid.

Wow, what a great story. It wasn`t easy to be silent so long and not telling anybody about it.

snailbones October 3 2011, 11:40:15 UTC

Congratulations on getting it posted!

It looks great, and I can't wait to read it, thank you.

merentha13 October 3 2011, 12:04:40 UTC

Thanks! I hope you will enjoy it!

bodiecuddle October 3 2011, 12:09:20 UTC

Big Big Squeezing Hugs to you Mate!!!!!

After month of thoughts and being nervous it is finally done.

The story is FANTASTIC!!!! and it was a pleasure for me to try a bit of artwork (Vid) to it.

Cheers mate xx

merentha13 October 4 2011, 00:28:54 UTC

Big hugs back at you! The vid is wonderful and I'm still amazed at how fast you put it together! We did good! *g*