Out of Africa Event: Is this Fixable?

[chwitchety]

Title: Is this Fixable? (Out of Africa Event

Comments

[sezzysicons]

Wow, that was great!
Loved your writing and it felt so real :)

Not sure if your continuing, but I'd like to see a sort of 'aftermath' after all this :) Up to you!

[chwitchety]

Thanks for commenting. I love to get comments saying it read like "real" and was in character, it is such a relief!! I really dont want to contribute to badfic.

I will ponder upon a part 2. I just feel anger at the moment, so maybe they can mellow after i suss it out, but nothing this week as Im gonna be pretty busy for a while. Maybe something before the next ep if the muse moves me.

[chwitchety]

we'll see.

[walking_weapon]

That sucked. But didn't at the same time. Know what I mean? You probably do since you wrote it :P

[chwitchety]

I'm not sure if ambiguous comments are the same as saying "that's interesting"? :)

Either way, I kind of interpret that as it sucks that they are fighting, but its better that they're fighting than being cordial to one another?

hmm...am sensing comments will not be as effusive as they were on my fluff fic. :D but i want some tears and fights atm!

[walking_weapon]

haha fluff always brings more comments. that and sexy time :P
I like it. I just hate that they're in that kind of a place.

[kimmyc95]

Ouch. I was hurting for both of them as I was reading this. I hope there's more to come!

[chwitchety]

I know, it's their passage through fire. But they will be stronger for't. Thanks for commenting. You are hoping as much as me!!

wow

[ape_the_crow]

More...must have. So good. Words fail me currently so just yes, more please. :)

Re: wow

[chwitchety]

Thanks so much, I am really appreciative that you liked it so much. I'll see what I can do!