With Emphasis On The "Real"

[chrisarciga]

I'm forcing extreme poverty to the trivial corners of my brain

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[masiaaa]

First stanza, sixth line, second to last word...

*Have lasted. Seeing as how "feelings" is plural love should not the verbs agree with their subjects? I thought I'd try and re construct the words I thought you to be relaying in this lovely little manifestation of hidden emotions. It is strange though love that all of them are never displayed to me formally but more or less shown in this slightly taciturn manner.
Yours Truly,
Theloveofyourlife