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well i hav another peom- sum of u mite not get it but i want u 2 critique it ne ways....put what you think on a comment... thanks, i know its really long but please help me and tell me what you think shud change * i.e words that wud sound better!*
My World- By Me
My world is the place that i can go
The Place that only you and i both know
My worlds the place where i can still see your face
My world allows me to never forget you
My world allows you to never forget me too
In my world it rains all the time
So as to let all the tears out that i wish to cry
In my world im back at Naxos
In my world your not just a ghost
In my world your fiery spirit sings out loud enough for everyone to hear it
And in my world im one of everyone, just so i can hear it
In my world you stil say ' i love you'
And in my world i can say ' i love you too'
Though i cant live there i used to try
i used to wish on every single star in the sky
but now i know that my world is only in my mind
Though in THIS world your part of the rain
every time it pours down its an emotional drain
Because i miss you
i miss you mote than any star in the sky
and i miss you more every time i cry
but its comforting to know i can go back to my world
to the one we both know
where we have enough time to sit and watch the trees grow
because in my world your still there
because in my world you can still run your fingers through my hair
and in my wordl your my dream come true........
and in real life: i still love you
**MAHA**< the most amazing person ive ever known
My World- By Me
My world is the place that i can go
The Place that only you and i both know
My worlds the place where i can still see your face
My world allows me to never forget you
My world allows you to never forget me too
In my world it rains all the time
So as to let all the tears out that i wish to cry
In my world im back at Naxos
In my world your not just a ghost
In my world your fiery spirit sings out loud enough for everyone to hear it
And in my world im one of everyone, just so i can hear it
In my world you stil say ' i love you'
And in my world i can say ' i love you too'
Though i cant live there i used to try
i used to wish on every single star in the sky
but now i know that my world is only in my mind
Though in THIS world your part of the rain
every time it pours down its an emotional drain
Because i miss you
i miss you mote than any star in the sky
and i miss you more every time i cry
but its comforting to know i can go back to my world
to the one we both know
where we have enough time to sit and watch the trees grow
because in my world your still there
because in my world you can still run your fingers through my hair
and in my wordl your my dream come true........
and in real life: i still love you
**MAHA**< the most amazing person ive ever known