Pride Goeth Before You Fall - Part 3 (of 6)

[chosenone]

Summary: “You find who you love, and then you make the absolute best you can of it. However long it lasts, ain’t no one who’s experienced it can say it wasn’t worth it.”

Rating: R for some sexual situations

Pairing: Mal/Kaylee, brief Kaylee/Simon

Spoilers/Timeline: post-BDM (spoilers for the movie)Disclaimer: What Joss creates, I worship.

Comments

[lemniskate]

now, keep in mind I'm going for low, almost subliminal here. “moooooooooooooooooore. mooooooooooooooooooooooooore. moooooooooooooooooooore!” :)

i love all this, their thoughts and how they're wrestling with what they want :)

[krankykittie]

This is spot on!! Great job. I'm living for these updates. Thanks for making my day :)

[bingblot]

Ooh, yay!!! I am so loving this fic!!!
Love how uncomfortable poor Mal and Kaylee are now, love the way you write their train of thought. Spot on!
Interesting- how you put it that the incident of Kaylee getting shot was why Mal always had a distrustful eye on Simon. That actually makes a lot of sense.

Can't wait for more!!

[_astralis]

Loved this chapter too! Poor Mal and Kaylee, making themselves miserable. :)

[xbex]

This is excellent! Have just gorged myself on the first three chapters, and now I'm impatient for more. More please. (Have I mentioned that I'm impatient?)Thanks!