Comments | chopchica: SGA Fic: Reclaiming (Sheppard, McKay, pg)

chopchica

SGA Fic: Reclaiming (Sheppard, McKay, pg)

Jan 04, 2006 22:40

I'm jumping back in after having taken a writing break over the last few months. This story never would've happened without cheerleading and handholding from lcsbanana and perishtwice. docmichelle and isiscolo provided more of the same, with the added bonus of some lovely betas. Any mistakes left in this are so very mine ( Read more... )

fic, non-porny!, john/rodney, sgafic

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some_stars January 5 2006, 07:12:03 UTC

i REALLY love the angle you took with this--not just the general "person in his head! violated!" but the specific way that he *revealed John's feelings* and how *that* was a violation. I love that A LOT.

(p.s. you are missing a " in front of Teyla's quote.)

chopchica January 5 2006, 16:34:53 UTC

I love YOU a lot!

not_sally January 5 2006, 07:31:56 UTC

So heartbreaking and beautiful. Loved it.

chopchica January 5 2006, 16:35:10 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm really glad you liked it.

rahaeli January 5 2006, 08:55:19 UTC

Your John rings so very real to me in a way so many characterizations of him just plain old don't.

chopchica January 5 2006, 16:35:48 UTC

We're in the same fandom again! That fills me with glee. And also, what a lovely, lovely thing to say.

trinityofone January 5 2006, 10:02:11 UTC

This is...I think the best word is exquisite, because it's so delicately and perfectly crafted, every single detail building one on top of the other into something that's subtly, brutally effective. It's quiet, but it says so much. Excellent job.

I'm so glad you're back; I hope you're doing well!

chopchica January 5 2006, 16:38:01 UTC

Oh wow, this is some of the nicest feedback I've ever gotten. Knowing that it touched people like this is just such a wonderful feeling.

Although it does remind me that I owe you feedback on pretty much everything you've written lately. I loved it all! Well, except the angsty one which I didn't read. But I loved the rest of them! You are consistently excellent.

thegrrrl2002 January 5 2006, 14:13:12 UTC

Aw! Still rescuing each other. This is lovely, the way they communicate, and I can really see John reacting this way to the situation. And the last paragraph is just beautiful. ::happy sigh::

chopchica January 5 2006, 16:39:51 UTC

I can't see them ever stopping with the rescuing, which is good, cause I love stories that deal with that.

I'm so glad you liked it, hon!