Despite the fact that I love Ben Folds, this entry is not about him.

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Comments

[fearless_em]

>> I love kids' books.  What does that make me?  A kids' book lover?<<

Hm, a paedobibliophile?

Cute story, go you!
Good luck with getting it published!!

Sarah

[wrongwaylouie]

I didn't have time to read the story (YET). I'm just taking a study break, but you might like to know that I think that is an excellent photo. I'm loving the fall foliage that's just starting to occur here in NH, and I think I might steal your camera.

Take care, dood :o)

[lost_1n_you]

im always excited to see a new post from you, because its always something more than what i see on a normal basis.

but this...wow. im already planning on printing this, and saving it so its around for whatever mutant children i have of my own someday.

let me illustrate this thing...haha. the opening alone burned beautiful images into my mind. and the sparrow, yet desperate, just seems so playful in character, in the sense that any child reading this would fall in love with it.
i dont know, i feel like this could turn into something huge.

[chooseausername]

do you do art???

let's collaborate!

and i'm always excited to see a comment from you.
it's always undeserved praise.

thank you, ryan!

[lost_1n_you]

id love to collaborate..im in need of a good project.

[physics_thinker]

This is for kids how old?

[chooseausername]

umm, 8-11 ish

[imadrunkenslut]

isn't falling asleep what bed time stories are for?

[chooseausername]

yes, but how could you fall asleep with Carmen's alien-doll tucked in your arms?

weren't you scared??