1 - Enough
Title: Enough
Author: chokingsmoker
Pairing: Ohmiya (Ohno Satoshi and Ninomiya Kazunari), Yama (Ohno Satoshi and Sakurai Sho)
Rating: PG [?]
Disclaimer: Not for profit. Fiction.
Word Count: 2,028
Summary: Sakurai Sho thinks about Ohno Satoshi.
Notes: I tried to write Sho as the deep thinking Keio boy I've ( Read more... )
Anyway! ^-^
there's no going around it this time: GREAT MINDS THINK ALIKE!
Definitely! XD (Especially when it comes to the fact that there clearly should be more Sho/Ohno fic in fandom, right? XD)
mild is putting it mildly! :D seriously though, i think maybe he lives in his head and his thought processes are too fast for him, making him unable to react to the world going on outside. that could probably be why he appears to say strange things, because more than half of the conversation has been going on in his mind, and everyone who listens to him just caught the tail end of his thoughts. or maybe I think too much. :D
Well... he's not too bad, compared to others...^^" (After all, the classic attention deficit disorder is related to narcolepsia, so people who have it badly usually can't react to their environment all that much.)
But your theory is really interesting as well! ^-^ I like the thought that Ohno's thought-process works on a different level from other people's (maybe not actually faster, but just on a completely different planet, so to speak) and that what we hear him say merely is the tip of the iceberg. XD It would explain some of the weirder things he's said... ^-^
*sigh* i still need to take arashi porn 101, though.
Aww, don't worry about that too much! As long as they all love each other, it's all good! ^___^
But seriously, to me it seems that there isn't a "real" or "good" way to write porn. OK, there are definitely extremely bad porn stories, horribly written, out of character, boring, etc. ...but... a porn story could be perfectly well written and everything and still not appeal to everyone. That happened to me recently: I read a nice, well-written NC-17 Arashi fic and I liked it - but the porn just didn't get to me emotionally (that sounds dirty, but I don't really mean that in a "it made me hot" sort of way), so I basically read it like I would read an essay about insects' mating habits, while other readers loved it and thought it was really beautiful. Other times I've read a fic where the porn really got to me, but there might have been others who didn't think that way.
I'm rambling, sorry. ^^" What I meant is that you should just try, if you want to write it. I at least thought that the little scene you wrote up there - with Sho losing control in such a way - was incredibly hot. XD
(If you don't want to write it, though, that's perfectly fine as well! I love non-porny fics just as much as - or even more than - porny ones and there's nothing worse than people forcing themselves to write sex because someone else demanded it. :/)
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that's because someone was fiddling with the screen button and forgot to unscreen the comment before logging off. *puts on look of innocence*
I like the thought that Ohno's thought-process works on a different level from other people's (maybe not actually faster, but just on a completely different planet, so to speak) and that what we hear him say merely is the tip of the iceberg. XD It would explain some of the weirder things he's said... ^-^
exactly! i can't help but think that maybe he sees the world from a different perspective and his brain works quite unlike most people's. When I see clips where he says things not quite tangential to the topic, I'd wonder if his brain took unexpected turns [not random loops; that's more Aiba-ish], and his thoughts interconnected with other seemingly disjointed ones, making him blurt out something huh?!-inspiring. as for his spaced-out moments, those could be drug-induced those probably result from the way his brain works, however that is.
OK, there are definitely extremely bad porn stories, horribly written, out of character, boring, etc. ...
i understand what you mean. *nods vigorously*
a porn story could be perfectly well written and everything and still not appeal to everyone. That happened to me recently: I read a nice, well-written NC-17 Arashi fic and I liked it - but the porn just didn't get to me emotionally (that sounds dirty, but I don't really mean that in a "it made me hot" sort of way), so I basically read it like I would read an essay about insects' mating habits, while other readers loved it and thought it was really beautiful. Other times I've read a fic where the porn really got to me, but there might have been others who didn't think that way.
yes, yes, you are right and i agree with you. some of the stories i've read have perfectly executed porn that don't work for me.
I at least thought that the little scene you wrote up there - with Sho losing control in such a way - was incredibly hot. XD
because sho losing control IS incredibly hot. satoshi losing control is hotter, and arashi losing conrol is the hottest!
thanks for the encouragement. maybe my next fic will feature porn, and when it does, may i ask you to read it first [that might be a long while from now, though. am swamped with work *pouts*]?
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Ah, screened comment! XD That explains it! ^_________^
Ohno's brain taking unexpected turns makes a lot of sense with the things he says! ^-^ And probably in his brain, the things he connects do belong together - but to explain that to another person, he'd probably have to do a lecture of at least five minutes. ^-^
As for his spaced-out moments... that's what I like the ADD hypothesis for, because it explains both his hyper and his spaced-out moments. ADD is often the result of a lowered brain tension (or electricity), so oftentimes, the brains of people with ADD are in a state that's similar to what others experience shortly before falling asleep. (Which is those people are often hyperactive then - it helps them keep their brains from falling asleep.)
(I'm sorry, I'm rambling.^^")
because sho losing control IS incredibly hot. satoshi losing control is hotter, and arashi losing conrol is the hottest!
I agree partly - Arashi losing control is totally hot; but somehow I still think Sho losing control is the hottest (well... together with Jun losing control, I think), because he normally keeps such a tight reign over his temper. We know that he has a temper and a passionate side, but he's really working at concealing those and we don't see them on TV, so imagining him totally losing control with his bandmates and just pretty much throwing himself on them and ripping their clothes off... I think that's pretty hot! ^-^ (The only one coming close to that in my opinion is Jun, but less in a "raw, passionate" way and more in a "yearning, completely, utterly, HELPLESSLY in love with one of the others" way.)
maybe my next fic will feature porn, and when it does, may i ask you to read it first [that might be a long while from now, though. am swamped with work *pouts*]?
Yes, sure! ^-^ Just tell me when it's finished and I'll send you my email address in a message. ^-^ (Although I do have to warn you that I tend to be a bit OCD with stuff like that, so I sometimes take a bit longer to finish something like that, because I comment on everything. v-v")
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