ooc --- critique

[chocolats]

i haven't done this in a while, but it isn't because i think this one's in any way perfect. i'm looking for honesty and you can either leave an anonymous or non-anonymous comment here with your thoughts. this can be you speaking or your muse, just specify if it's a muse or a writer in the subject line. these will also be screened and i might or might not reply depending on the content of the message (of course i'll answer if you're asking a question).

thanks.