Comments | chocolate_muse: [FIC]: The Silent Country (Dean/Jimmy, Adult)

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[FIC]: The Silent Country (Dean/Jimmy, Adult)

Jan 10, 2011 10:27

Title: The Silent Country
Author: nyoka @ chocolate_muse
Characters/Pairing: Jimmy Novak, Dean Winchester [Dean/Jimmy], Claire Novak
Rating: NC-17
Count: ~9,950
Disclaimer: Supernatural belongs to the CW and Kripke. I own nothing and no one.
Warnings: language; sexuality.
Notes: This goes AU post-S5. A pinch hit written for janie_tangerine as part of spn_jimmynovak's Novakfest.
Summary: ( Read more... )

pairing: dean/jimmy, fandom: supernatural, genre: slash, challenge: novakfest, type: one-shot

Comments 40

enigmaticblues January 10 2011, 21:12:46 UTC

This was just achingly gorgeous. I loved it.

nyoka January 11 2011, 14:03:57 UTC

I'm so glad this piece worked for you! Thank you so much for reading and commenting <3

janie_tangerine January 10 2011, 22:24:10 UTC

OMGOMGOMG I LOVE THIS SO MUCH. I think I love everything about this omg *squees*

I don't even know how to start without rambling so maybe I'll make you a list of over-appreciate things? I mean.

- First thing, I loved the general idea of this. I really like the whole Jimmy/Dean/Claire being a sorta dysfunctional family unit on the run.
- Your Jimmy POV was amazing. God it sounded so him, from how he misses Castiel to how much he loves his daughter and still misses/loves Amelia even if he tries to move on, and how he sees Dean and how he remembers Castiel and what he's now compared to what he used to be. The scene in the church was especially gorgeous but the one where he and Dean shared cigarettes was pretty awesome as well. (And the laundry one was win, really ( ... )

nyoka January 11 2011, 14:20:10 UTC

Janie, I'm so thrilled this piece worked for you! I really liked your prompts, and I wanted to give Jimmy that happy sunset ending you wanted to see him get. The idea of Jimmy/Dean/Claire as this family unit thrown together was so fun to play with. I really liked exploring a post-Castiel Jimmy, looking at how the experience changed him and how he sees his life in two ways now -- who he was before Castiel and who he is after. Dean, oh Dean, who is also trying to figure out his way in the world after the war, while wanting to take care of Jimmy and Claire as well -- b/c we know that Dean has that instinct to care and protect. And I definitely wanted to explore how Cas had that big impact on all their lives in some way, how he was the catalyst for them coming together in the first place. And now that they're together, how Jimmy, Claire, and Dean are all helping each other to move on. They had a lot of angst to work through considering their lives up to then, but I do see them as finding a peace and love with each other in the end. ( ... )

vasiliki January 10 2011, 23:43:20 UTC

There's a thrumming to the world these days, an energy he feels in everything, everyone. He doesn't remember noticing it before. Before Castiel, before the spill of grace into his body. But he notices it now. The song of the morning light as it moves across the water, the symphony of a bleeding sunset.

I so loved this idea, of Jimmy viewing things through a hint of grace! <3

nyoka January 11 2011, 14:22:15 UTC

Thank you so much for reading and commenting! I'm so glad you liked the idea of Jimmy seeing the world differently now. That hint of how angels must see the world <3

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nyoka January 11 2011, 14:22:55 UTC

So glad you enjoyed this! Thank you so much for reading and letting me know!

devilhunter0413 January 11 2011, 07:42:54 UTC

It's so... beautiful; Jimmy's POV... and the whole "I know who you are" bits... it's just so... NGHH.

nyoka January 11 2011, 14:25:06 UTC

Thank you so much for reading and for your lovely comment. I'm so thrilled this piece worked for you. I had a great time exploring Jimmy's POV, and that desire for him to figure out who he is now. So glad the lines about how they know each other worked for you too!

Thank you! <3