[FIC]: Soldiers of the Dust (Dean/Castiel, Adult)

Sep 03, 2010 18:44

Title: Soldiers of the Dust
Author: nyoka @ chocolate_muse
Characters/Pairing: Dean/Castiel
Rating: NC-17
Count: ~5,700
Disclaimer: Supernatural belongs to the CW and Kripke. I own nothing and no one.
Warnings/Spoilers: Takes place in the time period between 5.03 and 5.04.
Notes: Written for eretria as part of castielfest, working with several prompted ideas including, cuddling, ( Read more... )

challenge: castielfest, fandom: supernatural, genre: slash, type: one-shot, pairing: dean/castiel

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mulder200 September 4 2010, 03:44:26 UTC
Ah! Sometimes, actions speak louder than words.

Cas and Dean may not be good at expressing their feelings but the looks and touches say it all.

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nyoka September 4 2010, 13:27:10 UTC
Those two do have a hard time with feelings, but they do find a way to make it work, lol! I'm so glad this fic worked for you. Thank you so much for reading and commenting!

<333

Your icon is adorable!

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nyoka September 4 2010, 13:28:55 UTC
Oh wow, thank you for the lovely f/b! I'm so incredibly excited that you enjoyed this fic, esp. the imagery and word choice.

Again thank you so much -- and I do hope you enjoy some of my other work! ♥

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eretria September 4 2010, 09:21:50 UTC
God. God. I will admit that I had been hoping so very much that you would receive my prompt, and counting down on the authors who had posted, my hope grew, but then I thought, no, this is presumptuous - and lo and behold, I was right to hope after all and that's just marvellous.

This. This is everything I could have possibly wanted and more. It is a testament to how marvellous this story is when I don't even remember my damn prompts and don't even care because this story touched upon everything I could possibly want from a story.
The despair, the incredible UST, the road-trip feel of it, the drawn-out fight against the inevitable, the quietness, the beautiful, beautiful description of touch ...
I am awed, impressed and not in small part in love with this.
(You also get such a giant bonus for placing the first part in NC, and particularly Durham - which is the one city in the USA I visit at least twice a year because my SO lives just outside of it.)

Thank you.

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nyoka September 4 2010, 13:36:26 UTC
Hi!!!! I wrote you a sad PM asking for your forgiveness for my uber-lateness with your gift! I am really truly beyond thrilled you enjoyed this story. Thank you for your wonderful comment! Let me just say your prompts were absolutely AMAZING and beautiful in and of themselves. I was so nervous about doing them any sort of justice, and I really wanted to use them all. For this fic I went with the idea of touch as a form of communicating, and I really hope it's something that worked for you here!

Again thank you, thank you such wonderful prompts and for your patience beyond patience. It was such a joy writing for you. ♥

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eretria September 4 2010, 19:37:51 UTC
Excuse me while I'm still in the stage of disbelieving über-joyed dancing around the room to the soundtrack of "nyokawrote for me. nyoka!"

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timey_wimey_kid September 4 2010, 10:47:37 UTC
Beautiful <3

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nyoka September 4 2010, 13:38:43 UTC
I'm so glad you enjoyed this! Thank you so much for reading and commenting <3

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harper47 September 4 2010, 13:23:27 UTC
What a lovely, lyrical story. The words curl around you like Cas and Dean together. Beautiful word choice, use of imagery to tell their broken love story.

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nyoka September 4 2010, 13:42:24 UTC
Wow, thank you for reading and for your lovely words! It's all so appreciated. I'm so excited that you enjoyed this story, esp. the imagery and word choice. These two are just so much love to write and I'm so happy to share this fic with you ♥

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