[FIC]: i carry your heart with me(i carry it in my heart) [J², RPS, Adult]

May 25, 2010 19:43


title: i carry your heart with me(i carry it in my heart)
author: maboheme @ chocolate_muse
pairing: jsquared
rating: nc-17
count: ~1k
disclaimer: a sorta fairy tale.
notes: this is dedicated to the lovely enablelove on the occasion of her birthday. also for my 20_est_relships table to the prompt symmetry. title and opening quote from the poem by e.e. cummings.
summary: There's a lifetime in ( Read more... )

challenge: 20_est_relships, genre: slash, fandom: cwrps/cwrpf, pairing: jared/jensen, type: one-shot

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eilan May 26 2010, 02:09:33 UTC
Your words.
I just.
I don't have any words of my own.

Beautiful.

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nyoka May 26 2010, 02:14:40 UTC
Oh, hon, your feedback makes me smile so big :) I'm so glad you liked this! And thank you so much for your comments -- they're always appreciated and cherished. ♥

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runamok13 May 26 2010, 02:55:52 UTC
Your words always leave me speechless and touch me so deeply, and stay with me long after I've read them. Thank you for sharing :)

I still can't hear a train whistle without thinking of the boys. You've scarred me forever, in a good way. :)

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nyoka May 26 2010, 12:12:47 UTC
I am beyond honored that this piece and that any of my other pieces have touched you and stayed with you! Thank YOU for readng and offering me feedback and support. It's so appreciated!

And yes, trainyard!boys! Every time I pass an old abandoned trainyard I picture them there! More of that series to come this summer! So many adventures left for them!

:: hugs ::

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palodoecious May 26 2010, 03:00:36 UTC
I really like this,sooo passionate! and just looove it!
Thank you!

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nyoka May 26 2010, 12:13:24 UTC
Thank you so very much! I'm so happy you enjoyed this!

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fanofsuper May 26 2010, 04:08:37 UTC
Those 2 are made for each other !

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nyoka May 26 2010, 12:13:48 UTC
They really are! <33

Thank you for reading and commenting!

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fanofsuper May 26 2010, 17:27:01 UTC
You're welcome X 2

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enablelove May 26 2010, 04:45:00 UTC
Oh GOD. I am kind speechless at how gorgeous this is.

They're pressed together, large bodies twined like old tree roots. A beautiful image.

Babe this was so heartwrenchingly amazing. I felt so bad for the boys for having to live a lie but I'm also happy for them because they found their soul mates in each other.

Thank you hon, for this amazing fic. I <3 you ♥

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nyoka May 26 2010, 12:17:52 UTC
:: smishes you tight :: I hope your bday was good bb!

I am so incredibly happy you enjoyed this! Okay, to be honest, I started off writing this planning on something much happier and lighter, but the piece had a mind all its own and took itself in a little angstier direction. So I hope you didn't mind too much b/c I still wanted to dedicate it to you! [But do know I still have a much schmoopier piece I owe you at a later point in time ;)]

Thank you hon for your lovely words, bb! I♥U!

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enablelove May 26 2010, 15:48:36 UTC
Aww sweetheart, you don't have to, <3333333

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