[FIC]: In the Kingdom of the Sons (Dean/Castiel, Adult)

Apr 07, 2010 13:42

Title: In the Kingdom of the Sons
Author: maboheme @ chocolate_muse
Rating: R
Pairing: Dean/Castiel
Count: ~2,400
Disclaimer: Supernatural belongs to the CW and Kripke. I own nothing and no one.
Notes: Coda, of a sort, to 5.16. Written for my spn_30snapshots table to the prompt dream. Title from Adrienne Rich. Thank you nantahala for the read-through.
Summary: In dreams they are still holy, ( Read more... )

fandom: supernatural, genre: slash, challenge: spn_30snapshots, type: one-shot, pairing: dean/castiel

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mulder200 April 8 2010, 00:11:18 UTC
Wow! That was just achingly beautiful and yet bittersweet.

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nyoka April 8 2010, 01:01:13 UTC
I'm so glad you enjoyed this!

Thanks for readng and commenting! It's appreciated ♥

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harper47 April 8 2010, 01:09:36 UTC
Lyrical, aching and filled with all the pain and hunger and longing and everything that is Dean and Cas. I really enjoyed this. I really felt that dreamlike quality in everything that happened.

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nyoka April 8 2010, 10:33:43 UTC
Oh, thank you so much for the awesome f/b!

filled with all the pain and hunger and longing and everything that is Dean and Cas → I'm so beyond thrilled that you thought so! I was hoping to capture some of these emotions in this piece! I'm also so happy that the dream-like quality came across and that you enjoyed it!

Again thank you so much for reading! <3

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vivhasarifle April 8 2010, 01:13:39 UTC
Aw, this is just so sweet and painful, but wonderful at the same time! I love the last few moments.

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nyoka April 8 2010, 10:35:15 UTC
Thank you so much for reading and for the wonderful f/b! I'm glad both emotions came across in the fic and worked for you, and I'm especially excited that you enjoyed the last few moments -- they were my favorite to write!

Again thank you so much!!! <3

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nyoka April 8 2010, 10:38:20 UTC
Oh, thank you, thank you! <3

I'm so happy that you liked this piece (and those lines in particular as I wanted them to really encapsulate both D&C in that moment).

Again thank you for reading and commenting. It's very much appreciated!

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aesc April 8 2010, 02:00:17 UTC
Light spills through the windows, fills the room, and beneath Dean's hands Cas is long and smooth and golden with the sun.

Yes, oh my god, a thousand times yes.

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nyoka April 8 2010, 10:40:03 UTC
Hi! I'm so beyond thrilled that you enjoyed that line of prose and the imagery it contained!

Thank you so much for reading and for commenting! It's so appreciated ♥

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