The Metal OZ
I was less than impressed with Tin Man. There were so many moments that I thought "Woah what if they did this!" or "What if they did that!" and they never did. So I'm writing my own version of the Wizard of Oz, filled with my ideas of how they could have made the story so much cooler. Here is a small part of what I've written so far:
With the Cowardly Lion's Sword in hand and standing in a pool of her own blood Dorothy quickly drove the blade deep into the packed soil to the side of the Yellow Brick Road. Within the golden bricks of the road the blood trickled past sensors long dormant and, quicker than thought, the road reacted with old protocols against violent activity along the Golded Way. 500,000 volts of electrity blasted through the Road, the alchemically pure gold bricks acting as a superconductor. In an instant all her foes were reduced to ash and flames, Dorothy herself screamed in agony as the Nanocolony within her worked at full capacity to insulate her brain and vital organs while simulatiously regenerating her flesh and replenishing her diminished blood supply. Just as fast as it started it was over, Dorothy quickly let go of the sword which had almost instantly become white hot, the packed earth around it reduced to quickly cooling molten lava. The smell of Ozone was almost overpowering.
Tell me what you guys think! Awesome right!?
With the Cowardly Lion's Sword in hand and standing in a pool of her own blood Dorothy quickly drove the blade deep into the packed soil to the side of the Yellow Brick Road. Within the golden bricks of the road the blood trickled past sensors long dormant and, quicker than thought, the road reacted with old protocols against violent activity along the Golded Way. 500,000 volts of electrity blasted through the Road, the alchemically pure gold bricks acting as a superconductor. In an instant all her foes were reduced to ash and flames, Dorothy herself screamed in agony as the Nanocolony within her worked at full capacity to insulate her brain and vital organs while simulatiously regenerating her flesh and replenishing her diminished blood supply. Just as fast as it started it was over, Dorothy quickly let go of the sword which had almost instantly become white hot, the packed earth around it reduced to quickly cooling molten lava. The smell of Ozone was almost overpowering.
Tell me what you guys think! Awesome right!?