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FIC: Why Clyde Langer Will Never Throw Another Party Ever Again

Feb 12, 2008 23:43

Title: Why Clyde Langer Will Never Throw Another Party Ever Again
Author: biichan
Fandom: The Sarah Jane Adventures
Pairing: Clyde/Luke pre-slash
Rating: PG
Word Count: ~850
Summary: Clyde knew something was up after Spin The Bottle.
Prompt: 'Show me more of this Earth thing called kissing' - game

( Clyde knew something was up after Spin The Bottle. )

the sarah jane adventures, clyde langer

Comments 17

livii February 13 2008, 08:08:59 UTC

This is so cute! I love the bit with the bottle, hee. Hurrah for more Clyde/Luke (I'm ever so amused how many people wrote it for this ficathon - I've got one coming still).

doyle_sb4 February 13 2008, 09:48:25 UTC

I'm so pleased by the tiny surge of Clyde/Luke, and wondering how to increase it further...

biichan February 23 2008, 09:00:30 UTC

As soon as I saw the prompt I knew I'd make use of Spin The Bottle. It's too useful of a party game not to.

persiflage_1 February 13 2008, 08:18:52 UTC

More Clyde/Luke? This pairing's obviously keen !

This was very cute !

Best bit: "So it's just coincidence that Luke kept spinning the bottle so it pointed at me."

"Of course," said Maria. "You can't possibly think he deliberately calculated exactly how hard he'd have to spin the bottle so that it would land on you."

"Right," said Clyde. "To do that you'd need some sort of super genius made-by-aliens brain.

Heehee !

biichan February 23 2008, 08:59:30 UTC

Hee. Everyone loves that bit. So do I.

And I will see about writing more Clyde/Luke if the muse beckons. I already know they're definitely going to end up being one of those ships that sort of lurk around the edges of my fic, that you can take for granted that they're sort of happening in the background.

persiflage_1 February 23 2008, 10:06:30 UTC

I'm not a huge fan of slash, but Clyde/Luke is a pairing I can make an exception for, they're so cute...

lil_1337 February 13 2008, 08:43:59 UTC

Poor Clyde *pets him* He just doesn't have any luck.

biichan February 23 2008, 08:56:21 UTC

At least he gets to meet the nice hamster people?

lil_1337 February 23 2008, 09:06:39 UTC

That's important.

doyle_sb4 February 13 2008, 09:47:00 UTC

“Of course,” said Maria. “You can't possibly think he deliberately calculated exactly how hard he'd have to spin the bottle so that it would land on you.”

“Right,” said Clyde. “To do that you'd need some sort of super genius made-by-aliens brain.”

*falls over*

This is perfect. I love it so much. *dances you*

biichan February 23 2008, 08:57:19 UTC

*dances with you!*

Oh good. I was worried that it was too rough or something. I'm glad it came out well anyhow!

petronelle February 13 2008, 11:19:29 UTC

This is adorable!

biichan February 23 2008, 08:55:42 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you like!