Comments | choc_fic: Postscript [SGA, Ford/Sheppard, PG]

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Postscript [SGA, Ford/Sheppard, PG]

Sep 13, 2007 16:48

Title: Postscript
Author: bluflamingo
Rating: PG
Warnings: None
Word count: 2598
Summary: The end of the world is coming and Aiden's feeling something less than fine (post-ep to Letters From Pegasus)
A/N: For kyuuketsukirui's prompt of "Ford/Sheppard, missing scene, 'a subtle kiss that no-one sees', sex OK, not PWP". Beta'd by enviropony

( Postscript )

aiden ford/john sheppard, stargate: atlantis, bluflamingo, aiden ford

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bluflamingo September 14 2007, 15:23:12 UTC

Thanks. Aiden makes me sad.

jalabert September 14 2007, 02:46:10 UTC

Very cool story!

bluflamingo September 14 2007, 15:23:20 UTC

Thanks.

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bluflamingo September 14 2007, 15:23:34 UTC

Thanks, that's nice to hear.

fuzzybluemonkey September 14 2007, 22:16:39 UTC

This is a great look inside Aiden's head. Very bittersweet. And I love the last line something fierce.

bluflamingo September 14 2007, 23:07:38 UTC

Thanks - I'm glad the last line worked, since it went through many revisions after my beta said, "yeah, that doesn't say what you want it to" (only more nicely) :)

gaffsie September 17 2007, 17:44:23 UTC

That last line was great - just the thing to give the story a bittersweet edge.

bluflamingo September 17 2007, 21:33:45 UTC

Thank you. Ford just makes me sad, cos he was so sweet, and things went *so* wrong.