YAY!! an update, LOL at your author note i'm guessing some people are still giving you a hard time, good thing you don't care, i love your stories 'cause they're so unique. i enjoy this chapter the emotions are so raw, you totally make me feel the angst. Don't go MIA, I miss your amaizing writting : ) Hugs!!
hey, long time!!! i love this!!! i have the sensation that oliver is not that near to chloe... damn it girl, where are you? scratching head here!!! (i'm going to re-read for clues, sigh) i don't mind the lack of chloe here, i mean, that's the point, isn't it? i don't mind more mature ac and bart, i mean, two people who care about the world's safety and by extension the habitants of said world have to be "a little" mature, at least sometimes. about mia, well i don't know too much about her, so it doesn't matter to me. and about oliver and his darkness, it's fine to me, this is about his evolution, or transition, or develop, or anyway... it's just that you focus more in him that the tv show itself... glad for that! (sorry for my english) read you soon!!! i hope
Comments 6
Reply
i enjoy this chapter the emotions are so raw, you totally make me feel the angst.
Don't go MIA, I miss your amaizing writting : ) Hugs!!
Reply
I for one love your more mature Bart.
Loving the story. Hope he's getting closer to his aim!
Reply
Reply
i don't mind the lack of chloe here, i mean, that's the point, isn't it? i don't mind more mature ac and bart, i mean, two people who care about the world's safety and by extension the habitants of said world have to be "a little" mature, at least sometimes. about mia, well i don't know too much about her, so it doesn't matter to me. and about oliver and his darkness, it's fine to me, this is about his evolution, or transition, or develop, or anyway... it's just that you focus more in him that the tv show itself... glad for that! (sorry for my english) read you soon!!! i hope
Reply
Leave a comment