This story always knocks my socks off. I love how 'messy' you let the characters' actions get. The writing is so clean and clear that it's like the reader is right in the thick of things. At the same time, you don't spare the characters all that angsty muddling-through... problems and conflicts don't make a dramatic appearance and then quickly wrap up in a neat, pretty bow. I love how you let Ollie, Chloe and other JLA members get their hands dirty and show how it doesn't make any of them less of a hero, really... just human.
I hope, hope, hope, that Mia is already safe. This fic is just non stop suspense. It's so good to read this chapter, but now you just left me wanting for more!
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Anxious for the next chapter, as always :)
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non stop suspense. It's so good to read this chapter, but now you just left me wanting for more!
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