Editing The Right Ear Piercing
With all my lovely constructive criticism on my recently posted story I felt like I got a good ass kicking to stop being lazy. I got over my anxiety about posting and got the worse part over. Now I feel more comfortable taking the time to flesh out this story. For now I’m leaving up the old one but, I am currently editing the story to repost the revised one in its place later.
I took into consideration everyone’s great comments and the story is starting to change so much that it is almost unrecognizable. I took out all the person descriptors that were unnecessary. And I edited what I hope is all the spelling and grammar issues.
I shouldn’t have posted the story after writing it when I was so tired. Even after reading it tons of times my tired eyes just missed all those mistakes.
I surprised myself when I started to flesh out this story that it just flowed out so fast from my thoughts. The rating is going to jump up too. I don’t know how but it just happen when I was writing and I like it much better being more adult themed. I want most of my stories to be adult themed so I’m pleased to say I’m getting there faster than I thought I would.
I want to create a story I can be proud of and I can do so much better. It should be up soon I think but with how much more I’m adding I don’t actually know yet. I think it will still be a one-shot.
Anyways I’m going to get back to working on it.
Tschüss!