CHINGUX 2014: oh, baby, don't hurt me (1/1) for hailynx

Aug 24, 2014 00:09

Title: oh, baby, don’t hurt me
Author: knotweed
Recipient: hailynx
Pairing/Focus: baekhyun + chanyeol friendship, chanyeol/jongdae, baekhyun/kyungsoo
Rating: pg13
Warnings: N/A
Length: 2.4k
Summary: the one where chanyeol has a crush on the new transfer student (who may or may not be a gang leader), baekhyun is not the least bit helpful, and rumors ( Read more... )

ship: baekhyun/d.o, ship: chanyeol/chen, cycle: summer 2014

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j2ster October 30 2017, 03:20:31 UTC
this was such a sweet and entertaining read!! everything flowed so perfectly. the characterization was on point in all ways possible--the storyline, and especially the dialogue. i appreciate the sliver of baeksoo. it was tiny in the large scheme of things but what little appearance they had was maximized with all the touching and sweet talking and i can't be more thankful. also the chenyeol!!!! how chanyeol was so dumb (everyone in this fic was, but that's not the point) and unabashedly frank about everything and how jongdae was just plain amused of everything but no less willing and altogether these were what made this fic awesome.

also this part:
Apparently, Huang Zitao heard from Oh Sehun who dances with Kim Jongin who lives next to Kim Joonmyun who sometimes hung out with Zhang Yixing who was best friends with Lu Han who basically lived at Kim Minseok’s house which happened to be near Kim Jongdae and Do Kyungsoo’s old school district that...
only names were mentioned but still their relationships were so canon and believable--dancers sekai and best bros layhan (aka the best broship ever) and the xiuhan. yes. a+++

you're an amazing writer and i thank you for writing and sharing this with us. c:

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