CHINGUX 2014: pandora's bottle (1/1) for chanmimi

Aug 24, 2014 00:00

Title: Pandora’s Bottle
Author: nachtegael
Recipient: chanmimi
Pairing/Focus: Chanyeol/Kyungsoo, Chanyeol/Baekhyun (Baekhyun/girl!Sehun)
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: language
Length: 9,000
Summary: Chanyeol is surprised to find a bottle of whiskey outside his front door with a note attached.

Chanyeol is surprised to find a bottle of whiskey outside his front door with a note attached. )

ship: chanyeol/d.o, ship: baekhyun/chanyeol, cycle: summer 2014

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chanmimi August 24 2014, 06:14:57 UTC
SPOT

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chanmimi September 1 2014, 20:40:13 UTC
Kyaaa this is awesome! *u*

I'm happy you choose this prompt! Apartement aus are my fav
Chansoo as flatmates! And the chanbaek! Their overall relationship is perrrfff- chanyeol first clinging to baek but at the end of the day he always came back to kyungsoo
My otp was cb but after the 'news' -,- I kinda shift to chansoo~ ahahaha I love their cat-dog relationship! To think that Soo was hiding his feelings for Yeol all along and Yeol that didn't realize his feelings for Soo... they are forever meant to be >u<
And (kinda) evil Luhan!!! I always love snarky Luhan!!! And Chen too!! Their presence adds more spice hahaha way more better than those girly Luhans

Imagining kyungsoo doing Nanta is just simply wonderful.

The ending is perfect, you end it at the right moment :3
Thank you for making this prompt baby come true!!!

(I'm sorry I only drop my comment now! ;A; School eats me orz)

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nachtegael September 2 2014, 09:16:54 UTC
Oh yay~! I'm so glad you like it, even the ending! (and you know what nanta is omg!)
I'm kinda with you on that, not because of the 'news' but just...idk, all I know is I started writing baekyeol and that's not how it ended lol.

Eheh, cat-dog is a good way to put it! I like being able to take out all my uptight and b*tchy feelings through characters, I feel slightly less guilty that way, so it was fun to write their dynamic (and kinda evil Luhan!)

Thank you for your awesome comment! Waiting for it just made the week more exciting ;)

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dyolusionyeol August 24 2014, 20:27:20 UTC
ahh jealous kyungsoo!! i swear we need more of that lol

this was a fun read and you had their characters pretty much down. i think my favourite was the ending bit with chansoo finally together (and drunk luhan ofc)
I wish there was more of them being a couple than not, but it was still a really nice story!
hope u write more chansoo ♡

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nachtegael September 1 2014, 15:09:18 UTC
Thank you for reading! Yeah, sorry the ending feels kinda rushed, but the story just decided to end itself there. I thought I didn't ship chansoo, but then chansoo happened, so...yay! I'm glad you liked it. (drunk luhan was my favorite bit, too)

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anonymous August 25 2014, 00:04:56 UTC
hello... not trying to discourage the writer but it would have been nice if it said chanyeol/kyungsoo first instead of baekhyun/chanyeol and warned me about baekhyun/girl!sehun just a rec!

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nachtegael September 1 2014, 15:05:25 UTC
I'm so sorry for overlooking those points! Thank you for letting me know so it could get fixed!

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